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Array ( [sid] => 56403 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What You Do To Me [time] => 2004-07-16 14:20:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You do so much to me.
Do you even realize?
I don't understand.

You confuse me so much.
You're so hard to comprehend.
You play with my mind.

You said you loved me more than anything else.
And then you left without a word.
Why did you do that to me?

Don't you know how upset I was?
I cried myself to sleep and stopped eating.
I prayed for your safety.

I didn't know where you were or why you left me here all alone.
I didn't know how long you'd be gone.
I didn't know if you still loved me.

After months of crying, I got over you.
You hurts me, you scarred my soul.
Then he came along.

He made me realize that the world was an okay place.
And he made me realize I was worth more than you ever gave me credit for.
He was patient, slow, and gentle.

He helped me through this difficult time.
Then suddenly you came back.
I was overjoyed, my love had returned!

But you had changed.
A lot.
Probably too much.

You weren't fun anymore; you were so stiff.
You didn't talk like you used to,
And you didn't treat me like your special girl.

You lost your smile.
You lost your charm.
Your eyes weren't bright and twinkling.

What happened to you?
I didn't know.
But I still loved you.

Soon I realized I was torn between you and him.
I loved you both.
What was I to do?

After much contemplation and tears,
I chose him.
He was there for me when you had left me.

He was there for me when I really needed someone.
HE supported me
And he was reassuring.

We still see each other sometimes.
Sometimes we still talk.
You say you're sorry, that you still love me.

Please don't say such things for you know I will always love you.
But the pain you caused won't ever be forgotten
I forgive, but I never, ever forget.

MW 2000
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What You Do To Me

Contributed by Tinkkerbelle on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:20:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You do so much to me.
Do you even realize?
I don't understand.

You confuse me so much.
You're so hard to comprehend.
You play with my mind.

You said you loved me more than anything else.
And then you left without a word.
Why did you do that to me?

Don't you know how upset I was?
I cried myself to sleep and stopped eating.
I prayed for your safety.

I didn't know where you were or why you left me here all alone.
I didn't know how long you'd be gone.
I didn't know if you still loved me.

After months of crying, I got over you.
You hurts me, you scarred my soul.
Then he came along.

He made me realize that the world was an okay place.
And he made me realize I was worth more than you ever gave me credit for.
He was patient, slow, and gentle.

He helped me through this difficult time.
Then suddenly you came back.
I was overjoyed, my love had returned!

But you had changed.
A lot.
Probably too much.

You weren't fun anymore; you were so stiff.
You didn't talk like you used to,
And you didn't treat me like your special girl.

You lost your smile.
You lost your charm.
Your eyes weren't bright and twinkling.

What happened to you?
I didn't know.
But I still loved you.

Soon I realized I was torn between you and him.
I loved you both.
What was I to do?

After much contemplation and tears,
I chose him.
He was there for me when you had left me.

He was there for me when I really needed someone.
HE supported me
And he was reassuring.

We still see each other sometimes.
Sometimes we still talk.
You say you're sorry, that you still love me.

Please don't say such things for you know I will always love you.
But the pain you caused won't ever be forgotten
I forgive, but I never, ever forget.

MW 2000




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Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:26:16 PM AEST
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Great choice, good work.
huggs,
emy


Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:28:10 PM AEST
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I Liked This And Long To The Point




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