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Array ( [sid] => 56394 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mistress Muffet (I Shiver) [time] => 2004-07-16 12:18:22 [hometext] => This is a song that started out as a poem and its punctuated as I sing the words now....it has dominance games, blood play, vampirism, submission and a twisted take on miss muffet [bodytext] => (==Chorus==)
When I, see you, I, Shiver
the things, you do, I, Shiver
Kneeling, before you, I, Shiver
When I, worship you, I, Shiver
(==End Chorus==)

((Verse 1))

Mistress, Muffet, Sat
On, her, subbie
Eyeing a, potential, slave
when, aling came, spider
And sat, down, beside her
Poor spider, he'd lost, his way

(==Chorus==)
((Verse 2))
Suitably, Chast,ised
And holding, his, pride
in his hand, he, slinks away
A drama Queen, She's mean,
To be, mean, but
He'll live, to letch, another day

((Break))
Bloody, the rose of her lips
Her hips, sway, full of sin
A rose, caress, upon my kneck
Hot, her Tongue
my blood,
Her breath,

Look, into, my eyes, as I die
A wold. waiting, to be saved x2

((chorus in higher key))
Solo
Return to verse 1 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 34 [informant] => ArdRi79 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Mistress Muffet (I Shiver)

Contributed by ArdRi79 on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:18:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

(==Chorus==)
When I, see you, I, Shiver
the things, you do, I, Shiver
Kneeling, before you, I, Shiver
When I, worship you, I, Shiver
(==End Chorus==)

((Verse 1))

Mistress, Muffet, Sat
On, her, subbie
Eyeing a, potential, slave
when, aling came, spider
And sat, down, beside her
Poor spider, he'd lost, his way

(==Chorus==)
((Verse 2))
Suitably, Chast,ised
And holding, his, pride
in his hand, he, slinks away
A drama Queen, She's mean,
To be, mean, but
He'll live, to letch, another day

((Break))
Bloody, the rose of her lips
Her hips, sway, full of sin
A rose, caress, upon my kneck
Hot, her Tongue
my blood,
Her breath,

Look, into, my eyes, as I die
A wold. waiting, to be saved x2

((chorus in higher key))
Solo
Return to verse 1

Copyright © ArdRi79 ... [ 2004-07-16 12:18:22]
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Re: Mistress Muffet (I Shiver) (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:26:28 PM AEST
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Very interesting but good none the less it still has my mind boggled though I must say. I enjoyed it.

Re: Mistress Muffet (I Shiver) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:29:19 PM AEST
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nice job, interesting imagery and succint.

Re: Mistress Muffet (I Shiver) (User Rating: 1 )
by asr898 on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:45:08 PM AEST
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I like it, and it's a cool twist on miss muffet. Nice :-)

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