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Array ( [sid] => 56388 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We All Fall Down [time] => 2004-07-16 12:04:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sometime in life we all fall down,
Someone comes along & steals our crown,
We get dealt blows & we get back up,
Until we are exhausted & have had enough.

Then getting back up becomes quite hard,
Our feelings start to feel tarred,
Hurt comes thick &it comes fast,
Ghosts appear from our past.

Life starts to look so bleak,
When your emotions are weak,
A feather could knock you over,
When pain has got you by the shoulder.

Your once solid resistance,
Is now cracked & non existent,
As sadness has taken root inside,
It is a weed that will never die.

You feel so alone & small,
Can’t seem to recover from the fall,
Feel like everyone is your enemy,
This misery holds no remedy.

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We All Fall Down

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:04:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sometime in life we all fall down,
Someone comes along & steals our crown,
We get dealt blows & we get back up,
Until we are exhausted & have had enough.

Then getting back up becomes quite hard,
Our feelings start to feel tarred,
Hurt comes thick &it comes fast,
Ghosts appear from our past.

Life starts to look so bleak,
When your emotions are weak,
A feather could knock you over,
When pain has got you by the shoulder.

Your once solid resistance,
Is now cracked & non existent,
As sadness has taken root inside,
It is a weed that will never die.

You feel so alone & small,
Can’t seem to recover from the fall,
Feel like everyone is your enemy,
This misery holds no remedy.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-16 12:04:23]
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Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:09:50 PM AEST
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Great write :)

Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:20:33 PM AEST
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good write. It is sad that this disease does not have a remedy for if it did there would be less hate, lost and confussed youth out there. Maybe then we would all be able to stay on the rightious path. `Day`

Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:32:13 PM AEST
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I feel you can and will overcome this. I have you in my prayers.

Rita

Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:37:20 AM AEST
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i liek this one good flow alot of feeling put into it thank you xgripx

Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by iluvpencils on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:30:27 PM AEST
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Great poem! It has a great message

-Claire

Re: We All Fall Down (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 07:05:54 PM AEST
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Pixie, the fight ain't over till it's over. good message here. Nicely expressed.
Gentledove

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