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Life is a poem
Contributed by
gherkin
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Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:10:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A poem: Does not have to rhyme,
The syllables don't
Have to add up,
It doesn't even need to flow.
Metaphors are not necessary,
There is no set length;
Nor is there
a specified number of stanzas.
The poem, although must 'feel' right,
Does not have to be fully understood
- Not even by its own creator.
Is life God's poetry?
Life may not always fit together
But in no other circumstances would
Such viscously-contrasting elments work atall.
Which great poet hasn't had their ups and downs?
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gherkin
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2004-07-16 11:10:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Life is a poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:14:52 AM AEST (User
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interesting perspective - I enjoy your thought process and fullness.
Nice job. (and yes, we all have our ups and downs to be sure) |
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Re: Life is a poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Luinil on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 02:39:09 PM AEST (User
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great observation and wonderfully written* |
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