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My eyes were focused, but the rest of me weak.
You made me feel in ways I never thought I could
Then I hid it away so no one would see that I began to feel once again

THat didnt' last for long as the feeling began to be too much for me to bear
I could hold it tightly no longer, I felt that I had to share
It made me crazy to think of you
I wanted so badly to be the one in your arms, to feel your heart close to mine

Baby, can you tell me whether this is real
Or is it some fantasy
Are you forever going to be mine
Or am I going to be hurting for all the rest of time

I do not want to get close
if all I am going to feel is pain
The love I share with you is special
yet the heartbreak is something I would rather put aside

So is this for real, can you tell me
Will I be sorry for trusting you
My heart is torn so deeply
Because baby, I am beginning to fall in love with you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 25 [informant] => drummerchic18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

For All the Rest of Time

Contributed by drummerchic18 on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:53:59 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

When I saw you, the ground crumbled beneath my feet
My eyes were focused, but the rest of me weak.
You made me feel in ways I never thought I could
Then I hid it away so no one would see that I began to feel once again

THat didnt' last for long as the feeling began to be too much for me to bear
I could hold it tightly no longer, I felt that I had to share
It made me crazy to think of you
I wanted so badly to be the one in your arms, to feel your heart close to mine

Baby, can you tell me whether this is real
Or is it some fantasy
Are you forever going to be mine
Or am I going to be hurting for all the rest of time

I do not want to get close
if all I am going to feel is pain
The love I share with you is special
yet the heartbreak is something I would rather put aside

So is this for real, can you tell me
Will I be sorry for trusting you
My heart is torn so deeply
Because baby, I am beginning to fall in love with you

Copyright © drummerchic18 ... [ 2004-07-15 23:53:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: For All the Rest of Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:47:24 AM AEST
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You must accept love, not deny it, that is what is hurting you so. The love you have for this person is ripping from your seems, and if you do not let it out, you will simply burst. GREAT write. Keep writing.

Re: For All the Rest of Time (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:09:29 AM AEST
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Hmmmm...i shouldnt say this becasue i am quilty of turning things away just in case they hurt,
but dont be torn in half, if you dont trust you will feel bad that you dont,
If you do trust there is a chance it wont fall apart and if it does then you will still feel bad.
But there is always that chance it will not fall apart.
I guess we cant go around saying 'what if' all the time.
I hope this makes sence.
A great poem by the way.
It hit me hard.
Phil

Re: For All the Rest of Time (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:40:58 AM AEST
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Sad but written beautifully and I can certainly relate.
luv, huggs,
emy

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