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Array ( [sid] => 56345 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stream Of Blood [time] => 2004-07-15 23:04:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Broken pieces of a shattered Earth
Falling down
Down into a rushing stream
Pure, thck and red
A rushing stream of blood.
Dead souls walk the shores
Seeing not the crumbling world
Hearing not the horrid shreiks
Seeing only the path ahead
Led by a stream of blood.
A world of ashen hue
Dead life and live dead
Trees of blackest night
Gray world all around
Colored only by a stream of blood.
Life dying
Warm flesh turning chill
Light glinting off steel
Led by Death as he sits
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Stream Of Blood

Contributed by inseineangel on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:04:02 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Broken pieces of a shattered Earth
Falling down
Down into a rushing stream
Pure, thck and red
A rushing stream of blood.
Dead souls walk the shores
Seeing not the crumbling world
Hearing not the horrid shreiks
Seeing only the path ahead
Led by a stream of blood.
A world of ashen hue
Dead life and live dead
Trees of blackest night
Gray world all around
Colored only by a stream of blood.
Life dying
Warm flesh turning chill
Light glinting off steel
Led by Death as he sits
Watching a stream of blood.

Copyright © inseineangel ... [ 2004-07-15 23:04:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stream Of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:49:14 PM AEST
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Your poems always amaze me. Your poems so easy to imagine. The Dead land the blood filled river. Great write.

Re: Stream Of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by drummerchic18 on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST
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it gave me chills...lol. but its very good. Still very very creepy....

Re: Stream Of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:38:05 AM AEST
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Wow, im getting alot of imagery here.
I can see it all.
Great write.
Phil

Re: Stream Of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by IncoherentGirl on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:57:26 PM AEST
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this was a great write
kep writing

Re: Stream Of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by IncoherentGirl on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 01:59:07 PM AEST
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this was very very good
keep writing

Re: Stream Of Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:08:44 PM AEST
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absolutely amazing...i loved it...great work

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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