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Array ( [sid] => 56316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You stupid girl [time] => 2004-07-15 19:07:26 [hometext] => With childhood is that sense of innocence and naivety, that has always prevented me discovering the truth behind my parents' actions. [bodytext] => You stupid girl,
Get back to bed
Is what my mum said
Well, more a yell
As she never could find
A way proper way to tell,
To talk, to understand
To listen
Why we were going to miss him
All for us she insisted
The reason for our leaving
Whose story to believe in
Hers or His
She gave me life
He gave me bruises
Such a hard choice
It was just normal to me
But why were they not treated
As I was
I pondered
But it was left unconcluded
Another mystery
I shall never know
As my brother, left untold
Another story to unfold [comments] => 5 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 44 [informant] => gherkin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

You stupid girl

Contributed by gherkin on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 07:07:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

You stupid girl,
Get back to bed
Is what my mum said
Well, more a yell
As she never could find
A way proper way to tell,
To talk, to understand
To listen
Why we were going to miss him
All for us she insisted
The reason for our leaving
Whose story to believe in
Hers or His
She gave me life
He gave me bruises
Such a hard choice
It was just normal to me
But why were they not treated
As I was
I pondered
But it was left unconcluded
Another mystery
I shall never know
As my brother, left untold
Another story to unfold

Copyright © gherkin ... [ 2004-07-15 19:07:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 07:25:24 PM AEST
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holly cow! I-like-it-a-lot :) I can see where you're goin, and I relate :B...keep up the wonderful work!

Re: You stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 08:30:15 PM AEST
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First off - Welcome to YPDC! Sorry that it took me a couple days to stumble across your work - but I'm very glad I did now. This is a powerful piece..... yet stated with a kind of quiet grace. I liked it very much (though I am left feeling blue for the subject matter).

I eager to have a look at some of your other work. Please stay away and keep writing!
SNM

Re: You stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:10:12 PM AEST
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This is beautifully touching...
Jenni

Re: You stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:55:37 AM AEST
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very powerful and touching, WELCOME TO YPDC :) *hugs you*

pixie xx

Re: You stupid girl (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 05:09:24 AM AEST
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Very touching..beautiful poem. Oh..yea..welcome to ypdc..venkat

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