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Array ( [sid] => 56305 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I think i can....... Be what I wanna be [time] => 2004-07-15 16:56:29 [hometext] => I wrote this poem becuz I was just mad at the world and I dunno I think istead of trying to kill myself like most crack heads i write poetry [bodytext] => Wanting So badly just to be dead
Wether by knife to wrist or bullet in head
LIving life from the outside looking in
Lifes always been screwed up lets see where to begin?
The birth of sisters and brother
Wanting acceptance so badly from mother
You know you dont belong when your parents call you a freak
I think thats the point where all homosidal people reach they're peak
I dont know what I want more, me death or theirs
When I talk All I get are blank stares
Sometimes I think the only reason I'm alive is my crack head posse
They don't preasure, their not pushy, or bossy
They really care
they're always there
They think change would be the worse thing for me
Why can't my family let me be the way I wanna be? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MaRy_JaNe_420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I think i can....... Be what I wanna be

Contributed by MaRy_JaNe_420 on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:56:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wanting So badly just to be dead
Wether by knife to wrist or bullet in head
LIving life from the outside looking in
Lifes always been screwed up lets see where to begin?
The birth of sisters and brother
Wanting acceptance so badly from mother
You know you dont belong when your parents call you a freak
I think thats the point where all homosidal people reach they're peak
I dont know what I want more, me death or theirs
When I talk All I get are blank stares
Sometimes I think the only reason I'm alive is my crack head posse
They don't preasure, their not pushy, or bossy
They really care
they're always there
They think change would be the worse thing for me
Why can't my family let me be the way I wanna be?

Copyright © MaRy_JaNe_420 ... [ 2004-07-15 16:56:29]
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Re: I think i can....... Be what I wanna be (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:03:53 PM AEST
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good write, in my honest opinion these people are not your real friends if they were they would be trying to help you come off the drugs.. your family care about you very much they dont want to see their daughter kill themselves at a yong age, Im sorry if I have come on strong but my biological mum was a herion addict and she died when I was 9 years old, I carry alot of raw hurt and anger over it.... thanks for sharing this with us all,

pixie xx

Re: I think i can....... Be what I wanna be (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:00:12 PM AEST
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wowness...thats how I feel a lot...gret poem by the way ^-^

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