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Array ( [sid] => 56304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Love You [time] => 2004-07-15 16:49:00 [hometext] => I made a mistake and fell back in love with a guy that i broke up with but i didnt realize how much i really loved him until he got another girl....i broke his heart then i broke my own...thats what this is about...hope you enjoy it...please comment! [bodytext] => I should tell you that I love you
But I don’t think you would care
I don’t know maybe I’m wrong
But I don’t want to take the chance and share

So I think I’ll just hold it in
It won’t do any good
If I told you, it wouldn’t matter
You would never love me like you should

See, you have another girl right now
I guess she’s better than me
But that is no surprise
Because honestly I agree

She’s not going to mess up like I did
She won’t just leave you sad and blue
I made a big mistake
I’m sorry for what I put you through

I just wish you saw
The pain that this has caused me
Maybe then you would change your mind
Maybe that would be the key [comments] => 6 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 48 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I Love You

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:49:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I should tell you that I love you
But I don’t think you would care
I don’t know maybe I’m wrong
But I don’t want to take the chance and share

So I think I’ll just hold it in
It won’t do any good
If I told you, it wouldn’t matter
You would never love me like you should

See, you have another girl right now
I guess she’s better than me
But that is no surprise
Because honestly I agree

She’s not going to mess up like I did
She won’t just leave you sad and blue
I made a big mistake
I’m sorry for what I put you through

I just wish you saw
The pain that this has caused me
Maybe then you would change your mind
Maybe that would be the key

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-07-15 16:49:00]
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Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:54:20 PM AEST
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Awww I am sorry to hear this., i lost my first love and never thought I would or could love again, but I am now very much in love... with time you will find another love.... great write, very heart felt.

pixie xx

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by frozenfire on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 05:20:47 PM AEST
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Wow, this was incredible..keep it up!

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:21:26 PM AEST
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i feel you cannot love the way you should until you know how to lose.. very beautiful write... everyone makes a mistake just learn from it and move on..

tasha

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by mysterious15 on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 07:09:25 PM AEST
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I liked this. Ive felt like this before when my ex boyfriend went out with another girl and i still loved him A LOT.. i can relate very much. yep. very good. keep writing:)

*much love*

xo

:mysterious15:

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 08:07:05 PM AEST
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Hey we all love and lose at some point in ours lives, me, for example, I made the worst mistake i could ever make over a year ago now, when i broke up with my ex girlfriend, a mistake that has come back kicked me in the butt on more than one occasion, IF you still love him tell him! but no doubt he is still hurting and may reject you at first but keep at it and if he does really feel the same way it will show itself at some point, hopefully it wont be too late, like it seems to be for me! But then the choice is yours, just dont take the 'whats the point' point of you, please! I know of 2 people who do that and it REALLY annoys me! lol anyway, if it doesnt work out, good luck in the future!

Yours Stupidly
Kakashi
:D

P.S Sorry its so damn long! lol

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:44:27 AM AEST
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Now, my boyfriends ex did the exact same thing
fell back in love with him
it tore me to shreds
to think another could be loving him
just be careful
i advise you to get over this boy
nothing good will become of it
you will just torture yourself
like you are doing in this poem

BS x

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