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The famous
The poor
The used
The children with no food
The children abused
The fat
The skinny
The anerexic
The low self esteems
The darkness all over
Tormenting teenagers dreams
The body
The beauty
The clothes
The hair
Changing yourself
Wont get you anywhere
The gossip
The geeks
The preps
The jocks
The groups arent important
Why cant everyone just talk
The wars
The fights
The murders
The molesting
Why are these young teenagers
Having pregnancy testing
The world
Wont change
Theres nothing to do
I get the problem clearly
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World so wrong

Contributed by mysterious15 on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:41:26 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

The rich
The famous
The poor
The used
The children with no food
The children abused
The fat
The skinny
The anerexic
The low self esteems
The darkness all over
Tormenting teenagers dreams
The body
The beauty
The clothes
The hair
Changing yourself
Wont get you anywhere
The gossip
The geeks
The preps
The jocks
The groups arent important
Why cant everyone just talk
The wars
The fights
The murders
The molesting
Why are these young teenagers
Having pregnancy testing
The world
Wont change
Theres nothing to do
I get the problem clearly
Why cant you

Copyright © mysterious15 ... [ 2004-07-15 16:41:26]
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Re: World so wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:49:05 PM AEST
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This is a great poem and reminds me of another well inspired poem.

"A man was tossing beached sea turtles into the ocean when another man walked up to him and asked why are you doing that, there must be thousand of clams on the beach maybe even millions. How can you ever hope to make a differance. The man reached down with a smile and threw a sea turtle into the ocean saying "It made a differance to that one."

Re: World so wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 03:47:30 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS POEM!! It is a simple write but never the less great!! I think everyone wants things to change. Although the WORLD won't change, one person can make a single difference. Whether it is big or small. GREAT WRITE!!

Re: World so wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by bobbyclay56 on Sunday, 23rd October 2011 @ 07:30:48 AM AEST
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Nice poem but could have been tweeked a little more a four on a ten scale.

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