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Array ( [sid] => 56300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unknown [time] => 2004-07-15 16:34:41 [hometext] => Music, and poetry... [bodytext] => I just want to touch you,
I see you out there
What you have meant to me,
Is all I want to share

Someday I’ll do something,
This is all I pray
The way that you touch me,
I’ll touch someone that way

Your words leave me restless,
Though I’ve never met you
In the worst of my times,
They can help me get through

I listen to you sing,
Just laying there sometimes
If only they could see,
The wisdom of your rhyme

I think that then...
The world could be a better place
People could finally show...
Their God intended face

With your voice and your words,
I think you are His vessel
Creative, meant to help us,
When life gets much too stressful

Now, Unknown, I thank you,
Through my sleepless nights
Your words helped me think things through,
And rearrange my sights
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 303 [topic] => 37 [informant] => _Raspberry_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )

Unknown

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:34:41 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

I just want to touch you,
I see you out there
What you have meant to me,
Is all I want to share

Someday I’ll do something,
This is all I pray
The way that you touch me,
I’ll touch someone that way

Your words leave me restless,
Though I’ve never met you
In the worst of my times,
They can help me get through

I listen to you sing,
Just laying there sometimes
If only they could see,
The wisdom of your rhyme

I think that then...
The world could be a better place
People could finally show...
Their God intended face

With your voice and your words,
I think you are His vessel
Creative, meant to help us,
When life gets much too stressful

Now, Unknown, I thank you,
Through my sleepless nights
Your words helped me think things through,
And rearrange my sights

Copyright Â© _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-07-15 16:34:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:37:28 PM AEST
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Thank you for an inspirational poem.

Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:49:45 PM AEST
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this is really good , you should be proud of your writings,...

pixie xx

Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:18:08 PM AEST
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You are extremely talented. Your emotions flow well through your words. Words and music are, I feel, travel a direct pathway to our souls.

Rita

Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 04:30:59 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:50:58 AM AEST
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i support and agree with Ritas comment.
this was beautiful and greatly written.
i enjoyed reading this.
5 stars, wish i could give more.
Arden

Re: Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:13:00 PM AEST
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I want to thank everyone for their comments on this one, and let you all know that this is also dedicated to you, everyones poems here are also very touching and inspirational to me. THANK YOU ALL.

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