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Array ( [sid] => 56299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Change Of Fate [time] => 2004-07-15 16:22:25 [hometext] => This poem is about a person that I have wanted since 6th grade but I have no chance getting. It's a little different than some of the other poems that have to deal with this subject..please post comments and rate! I would really apperciate the feedback. [bodytext] => All I wanted,
Was someone like you,
Your perfect smile,
blonde hair that seems so thick,
When you run your precious hands though it,
They may get lost,
Your eyes of which color I have not found,
But I could stare into them until I blind,
Skin complexion was the perfect tan,
Hands that could be laced in mine,
For eternity,
Or that's what it feels like for me,
lips that kiss mine,
A body so divine,
All just a vision,
An image shown though lust,
Or is it love?
One or two,
You make the choose,
Shall you let me lust?
Let lonliness take all control,
Let me touch,
If I paid the toll,
Or let us fall deep,
fall hard into an unstraightened line,
That seems to fit us just fine,
Seems you chose lust,
As you must,
You and I are rival teams,
Never interfering with the others game.
But I do wish you luck,
And may the woman who choses you,
Be the luckiest of them all,
But I shall wait,
And pray to god,
He changes this fate.
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Change Of Fate

Contributed by AutomaticTLC on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:22:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

All I wanted,
Was someone like you,
Your perfect smile,
blonde hair that seems so thick,
When you run your precious hands though it,
They may get lost,
Your eyes of which color I have not found,
But I could stare into them until I blind,
Skin complexion was the perfect tan,
Hands that could be laced in mine,
For eternity,
Or that's what it feels like for me,
lips that kiss mine,
A body so divine,
All just a vision,
An image shown though lust,
Or is it love?
One or two,
You make the choose,
Shall you let me lust?
Let lonliness take all control,
Let me touch,
If I paid the toll,
Or let us fall deep,
fall hard into an unstraightened line,
That seems to fit us just fine,
Seems you chose lust,
As you must,
You and I are rival teams,
Never interfering with the others game.
But I do wish you luck,
And may the woman who choses you,
Be the luckiest of them all,
But I shall wait,
And pray to god,
He changes this fate.

Copyright © AutomaticTLC ... [ 2004-07-15 16:22:25]
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Re: Change Of Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 04:33:31 PM AEST
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Awwww this is so sad and moving that you never got to be with this person *hugs you*

good write,
pixie xx

Re: Change Of Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:17:02 PM AEST
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It seems like you are working through it.

Re: Change Of Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 04:44:38 AM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
huggs,
emy

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