Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	10-June 08:59:01 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 56290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can’t walk away! [time] => 2004-07-15 14:41:01 [hometext] => This one's about how ill they made me, and how they still have the nerve, even now to continue to start! well i can't walk away any more! then end verse is about what people like to say to do. well i can't do it!!! please read and comment. [bodytext] => Dissolved secrets,
In a pool of hate.
Rises my anger,
Upon my ex-mates.

What ever they are,
I don’t want to know,
But I’m still trapped beside them,
And I can barely let go.

What they made me,
Was a suicidal freak.
Well that’s what they called me,
When I had silver teared cheeks.

They made me want to die,
Made me feel no one cared.
They made me feel unwanted,
Unwelcome around there…

Now I have a little strength back,
It’s clear to me I’m better off with out.
And now it’s all got worse,
Because I fight back, I shout.

I look at what they made me.
I look at what I’ve become.
They thought it was fun to break me.
Until I went suicidally numb.

They think they’re so tough to continue.
Now that I’ve come back to school.
They think they can get away with it!
With making me want to end it all.

They think they can call me names,
Give me constant verbal abuse.
Well they’ve stepped way over the line!
Pulled out all of my screws…

Walk away.
What does that mean?
Oh right,
Now I see.
Close your eyes,
Put up with it.
Close up tight.
Take all the sh**
… and let’s not forget, to NOT, use your fist.
BALL SH**!
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 6 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Can’t walk away!

Contributed by deathdrop on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 02:41:01 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Dissolved secrets,
In a pool of hate.
Rises my anger,
Upon my ex-mates.

What ever they are,
I don’t want to know,
But I’m still trapped beside them,
And I can barely let go.

What they made me,
Was a suicidal freak.
Well that’s what they called me,
When I had silver teared cheeks.

They made me want to die,
Made me feel no one cared.
They made me feel unwanted,
Unwelcome around there…

Now I have a little strength back,
It’s clear to me I’m better off with out.
And now it’s all got worse,
Because I fight back, I shout.

I look at what they made me.
I look at what I’ve become.
They thought it was fun to break me.
Until I went suicidally numb.

They think they’re so tough to continue.
Now that I’ve come back to school.
They think they can get away with it!
With making me want to end it all.

They think they can call me names,
Give me constant verbal abuse.
Well they’ve stepped way over the line!
Pulled out all of my screws…

Walk away.
What does that mean?
Oh right,
Now I see.
Close your eyes,
Put up with it.
Close up tight.
Take all the sh**
… and let’s not forget, to NOT, use your fist.
BALL SH**!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-07-15 14:41:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Can’t walk away! (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 02:59:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This was good. Don't walk away from them stand up to them

Re: Can’t walk away! (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:20:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i know how this feels there are people like this everywhere they love to bring people down and talk behind their backs and break them down in front of their faces the best thing to do is stand your ground tell them how it is tell them how meaningless it all is and let them know where you stand and dont be a succa
NO SECRETS the best way to be and
Allways Sincere
Leana

Re: Can’t walk away! (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:07:12 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

*****in excellent nice flow xxx

Re: Can’t walk away! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 12:46:40 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Dear DeathDrop, it takes more courage to just turn and walk away than to stay!
Please don't let them do this to you.......turn away from them........they are so wicked, and so cruel........don't stay around and to you make a fool!
Horrible Horrrible People
I wish they would leave you alone
Love you with hugs I send
consue

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com