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Array ( [sid] => 56227 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fallen [time] => 2004-07-14 23:00:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Fall away and breathe to live another day
with it's hurts and pains, joys and gains
my heart aches yet weeps
What will become of me?
Will my heart die out?
Will my passions fade away?
My soul will never live in a grave
I can't stand and I can't stay
I'm too nervous to be still
My skin it turning grey
I see a light, a glimmer, a sparkle
It's out of reach
For it to be tangible, I would give my life
Give my soul
OH, what I would do to grasp it and cling to it
Though that would never be
It is just a simple dream
Dared to be dreamed inside a heavy heart [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 13 [informant] => drummerchic18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fallen

Contributed by drummerchic18 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:00:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Fall away and breathe to live another day
with it's hurts and pains, joys and gains
my heart aches yet weeps
What will become of me?
Will my heart die out?
Will my passions fade away?
My soul will never live in a grave
I can't stand and I can't stay
I'm too nervous to be still
My skin it turning grey
I see a light, a glimmer, a sparkle
It's out of reach
For it to be tangible, I would give my life
Give my soul
OH, what I would do to grasp it and cling to it
Though that would never be
It is just a simple dream
Dared to be dreamed inside a heavy heart

Copyright © drummerchic18 ... [ 2004-07-14 23:00:54]
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Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 01:53:41 AM AEST
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They should change this category from dark poetry to downer poetry.*g*

Stoney

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:13:38 AM AEST
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this was a very good poem and an excellent write.
you obviously have alotta talent and i look forward to your future works.
~vermillion~

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:55:46 AM AEST
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Oh so sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by kittie30 on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 05:27:55 PM AEST
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awsome poem u have a realy good talent in writing keep it up and again great write!!!!
kittie30 -peace

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