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“If you are not quiet I’ll put you in
a straight jacket” the hospital dressed,
enormous male nurse said.
…” But I don’t belong here this is a mad
house” “ so you think you’re normal
then? “ “Yes!” “ Walking around
Jerusalem claiming that you are God?”
“For Mary’s sake I was drunk that day”
The nurse had a gigantic syringe in his
hand full of yellow poison which he
stabbed through my heart. The room
swivelled around like a kaleidoscopic
twister. When I came to I sat on a comfy
carpet and twelve men listened attentively
as I outlined the future of man. Flying home,
from the holy land, the nurse was so scared
that I had to hold his hand while thinking
that I would look out of place in winter
cold London.

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a travel to the holy land

Contributed by Jan_Oskar_Hansen on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A Travel To The Holy Land

“If you are not quiet I’ll put you in
a straight jacket” the hospital dressed,
enormous male nurse said.
…” But I don’t belong here this is a mad
house” “ so you think you’re normal
then? “ “Yes!” “ Walking around
Jerusalem claiming that you are God?”
“For Mary’s sake I was drunk that day”
The nurse had a gigantic syringe in his
hand full of yellow poison which he
stabbed through my heart. The room
swivelled around like a kaleidoscopic
twister. When I came to I sat on a comfy
carpet and twelve men listened attentively
as I outlined the future of man. Flying home,
from the holy land, the nurse was so scared
that I had to hold his hand while thinking
that I would look out of place in winter
cold London.

Copyright Â© Jan_Oskar_Hansen ... [ 2002-10-25 19:30:00]
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Re: a travel to the holy land (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Blu-XTC on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 07:58:20 AM AEST
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very unique.keep wrtin.

Re: a travel to the holy land (User Rating: 1 )
by AllAlone on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:24:06 AM AEST
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it really ket me interested but it left me questioning what happened. way to keep the reader interested

Re: a travel to the holy land (User Rating: 1 )
by AllAlone on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:24:26 AM AEST
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it really kept me interested but it left me questioning what happened. way to keep the reader interested

Re: a travel to the holy land (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:03:07 AM AEST
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This reminded me of 'One Flew Over The Cuckoos Nest' Jan!
I had to read it twice, but I think I understood what you're saying or not, a very interesting tale, which I like very much.

With love
Dean:-)

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