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Array ( [sid] => 56195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => gone forever [time] => 2004-07-14 18:49:33 [hometext] => this is about how i felt when my best friend in the whole world died [bodytext] => Have you ever been so close to one friend,
that you didn't stop and think that any time it could end?
Have you ever loved someone so much you think,
there's a freeze-frame of a special moment with every blink?
Have you ever lost this special someone, without a goodbye?
Have you ever missed them so much, you can't only cry?
Sometimes I think it should've been the other way,
I left the world and she got to stay
But if she got to stay, she'd go through the pain,
the pain that i'm suffering that makes me insane

All the days, the weeks, the months, the years,
all come together to form these tears
All the seconds, minutes, hours go on,
I'm waiting and waiting to find you're not gone

A girl, a friend, but nobody knows
we weren't just best friends, more than just 'close'
A two-in-one package, you and me, me and you,
now i'm alone, feeling lost, it's untrue

Get up, go to school, you're sitting right there
Now get up, go to school-an empty chair.
There's a hole in my world, my life and my heart
I'm still not accepting the fact we're apart

'You never realise how much you love something 'til it's gone' they say
but i knew how much i loved you, I realised every day
We make the most perfect best friends and anyone could see
no matter how much I influenced you, you influenced me
You helped me by just being there, making me know
You'd never leave me, you'd never go

And you're helping me through this, helping me survive
because I know you're not gone, in my heart you're alive


R.I.P Chloe Kozyra 24th January 1988-20th March 2004
'In 1988 we were given a princess, in 2004 we were given an angel' [comments] => 14 [counter] => 1635 [topic] => 39 [informant] => 8kiwi8 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
gone forever

Contributed by 8kiwi8 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:49:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Have you ever been so close to one friend,
that you didn't stop and think that any time it could end?
Have you ever loved someone so much you think,
there's a freeze-frame of a special moment with every blink?
Have you ever lost this special someone, without a goodbye?
Have you ever missed them so much, you can't only cry?
Sometimes I think it should've been the other way,
I left the world and she got to stay
But if she got to stay, she'd go through the pain,
the pain that i'm suffering that makes me insane

All the days, the weeks, the months, the years,
all come together to form these tears
All the seconds, minutes, hours go on,
I'm waiting and waiting to find you're not gone

A girl, a friend, but nobody knows
we weren't just best friends, more than just 'close'
A two-in-one package, you and me, me and you,
now i'm alone, feeling lost, it's untrue

Get up, go to school, you're sitting right there
Now get up, go to school-an empty chair.
There's a hole in my world, my life and my heart
I'm still not accepting the fact we're apart

'You never realise how much you love something 'til it's gone' they say
but i knew how much i loved you, I realised every day
We make the most perfect best friends and anyone could see
no matter how much I influenced you, you influenced me
You helped me by just being there, making me know
You'd never leave me, you'd never go

And you're helping me through this, helping me survive
because I know you're not gone, in my heart you're alive


R.I.P Chloe Kozyra 24th January 1988-20th March 2004
'In 1988 we were given a princess, in 2004 we were given an angel'




Copyright © 8kiwi8 ... [ 2004-07-14 18:49:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:53:42 PM AEST
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you put difficult emotions into great writing ,well done hun, and we r always here for ya *hug* love sooze xxx


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:54:18 PM AEST
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very touching. i am saddened for your loss. take care.

brandon


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:59:06 PM AEST
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sad Poem nice dedication...
Great write.
Cheers robert (The long White cloud)


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:11:11 PM AEST
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kayli thats so utterly beautiful. it weird cos over the last few weeks ive been thinking about clo loads...dunno why. like lookin at the zippo lighter i bought, and the only cigs i ever lit with it was 1 or 2 of chloes. infact, it hasnt worked since.
*hugs* x x x x x
love u clo
- joel


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:28:42 PM AEST
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this is so sad...i hope you are doing alright and she lives on in your heart.never forget about her
luv always


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 08:04:03 PM AEST
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this is so sad but written well. One can feel the agoony of it all.
I've lost both my parents but never a best frind.
Hang in there as u have your angle always with u.
luv, huggs,
prayers,
emy


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by diamond_tears on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:50:45 PM AEST
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thought i was going to cry. beautiful poem :) love ya xxx


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by PurpleMoonJuice on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:38:51 PM AEST
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really beautiful, well done, musn't have been easy *hugs* :P
Vic xxxx


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:16:47 PM AEST
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heartbreakingly beautiful, the ending, i swear i skipped a breath and a beat of my heart, im soo sorry for your loss, big hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:00:36 AM AEST
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I had to cradle laurence in my arms for so long..
im crying now
I wish i was God

this is beautiful
x x x

Gem


Re: gone forever (User Rating: 1 )
by chocolate_girl on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:01:09 PM AEST
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choked. i really don't kno what 2 type. coz my hands aint workin propperly. Kayli, this is possibly the best iv read on this site! love uu xx see u xxx




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