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[aid] => mick
[title] => Forsaken
[time] => 2004-07-14 16:31:31
[hometext] => This is the first thing i have written in over 3 months please just give opions and suggestions on what i should look to improve
[bodytext] => Searching only to find, a un-explicable state of mind, unable to be expressed in my time by words nor actions, leaving the a bitter taste dissatisfaction. From my greatest distraction but the point of the frustration, lies in the question of agitation, looking for a point of penetration where the pain leaked, as death gleamed its pale and bleak eyes upon the answer which I seek casting a shadow of night, stealing its view from my sight, allowing me to ponder in what might have once been, if I hadn’t committed the deadliest of sins, which now terrorizes my soul within haunting me with empty bliss, and now force me to reminisce, on the one love that I now miss every single last connection, glaring at me in my reflection, from which there is no protection I am destine to forever, be forced to look back and remember, the dreadful day of your December which you were taken, the date my world was shaken, and my soul was left forever forsaken ~Divine~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Divine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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