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And cuts her ivory skin
Ivory turns to crimson
Oh, where do I begin?

She enjoys the pain she causes herself
It’s the only relief she has
A release from the stress of her everyday life
The rain cloud just won’t pass

She’s left alone to think life through
But that only hurts more
She doesn’t know what comes next
Her heart is just so sore

Emotional turns to physical
Oh, how fast it turns
She doesn’t want to remember
But everyday she learns

That life is only getting harder
There’s nothing she can do
She’s left alone to wither
And soon she’ll die too.
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Alone

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:33:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

She sits alone in the dark
And cuts her ivory skin
Ivory turns to crimson
Oh, where do I begin?

She enjoys the pain she causes herself
It’s the only relief she has
A release from the stress of her everyday life
The rain cloud just won’t pass

She’s left alone to think life through
But that only hurts more
She doesn’t know what comes next
Her heart is just so sore

Emotional turns to physical
Oh, how fast it turns
She doesn’t want to remember
But everyday she learns

That life is only getting harder
There’s nothing she can do
She’s left alone to wither
And soon she’ll die too.

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-07-14 12:33:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:37:48 PM AEST
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Awwww you are not alone hun, weclome to the site it's a great place you will find there are alot of others like you here.. *hugs you* I am one of them lol

great write, hope to read more from you

pixie xx

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:39:48 PM AEST
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i know just how you feel... because i've been there.
the truth hurts and there's only so much you can do to fight it when every thing gets on top and crushes you, but one day you'll be free. just hng on in there.
from deathdrop.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:49:23 PM AEST
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oh my god ive read both of your poems god im in shock at your writing you write like me its kinda creepy lol! good write

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by mysterious15 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:05:44 PM AEST
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this is good. this poem describes me too and probably millions of other people. i know of many cutters in this world and it's just too sad. my old friend cuts himself and can't get help and none of his friends can help him. he feels like this poem too. good wrk:)

:mysterious15:

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:36:27 AM AEST
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Ah... another cutter
There are so many on the site..
Very good, emotional poem

BS x

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:12:23 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this. thx

Dizza

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