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Array ( [sid] => 56152 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inside [time] => 2004-07-14 12:01:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's determined to unfold itself
This is the unraveling
If it's what you want to know
We suggest you listen carefully
A warning:
Before you decide to venture
Deep within it's mind
Those who choose to enter
Are sometimes trapped inside
There is no escaping
This, we know too well
The chasms deep inside
Are the pits of hell
But deep within the fiery holes
Hidden far from view
Beauty that's inside of it
We've chosen to show to you
It strives to have a love for all
...To show it every day
Sometimes It just can't succeed
The price it's heart must pay
Those who know it's lovers touch
Know the things it can destroy
Still they choose to hold it close
Their love it does enjoy
It is filled with shadows
Shaded by obsession
Over it's own sanity
It has never had possession
We hope that with it’s twists and turns
You’re willing for the ride
For deep within it’s twisted soul
Is the solace you will find
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 61 [informant] => _Raspberry_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Inside

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:01:04 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



It's determined to unfold itself
This is the unraveling
If it's what you want to know
We suggest you listen carefully
A warning:
Before you decide to venture
Deep within it's mind
Those who choose to enter
Are sometimes trapped inside
There is no escaping
This, we know too well
The chasms deep inside
Are the pits of hell
But deep within the fiery holes
Hidden far from view
Beauty that's inside of it
We've chosen to show to you
It strives to have a love for all
...To show it every day
Sometimes It just can't succeed
The price it's heart must pay
Those who know it's lovers touch
Know the things it can destroy
Still they choose to hold it close
Their love it does enjoy
It is filled with shadows
Shaded by obsession
Over it's own sanity
It has never had possession
We hope that with it’s twists and turns
You’re willing for the ride
For deep within it’s twisted soul
Is the solace you will find




Copyright © _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-07-14 12:01:04]
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Re: Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:05:38 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel *hugs you* I am going through it myself at the mo, dont know how much more I can take....*hugs you again*

great write, I really love your work,

pixie xx


Re: Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:21:38 PM AEST
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I really love this poem. This is a very exquisite, artistic piece with just the right amount of everything. I cannot express how much I love this poem. BRAVO!!! Encore!!
Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea


Re: Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:45:17 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem, and by the way thanks for the advice you gave on my untitled poem today.


Re: Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:03:45 PM AEST
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For deep within it’s twisted soul
Is the solace you will find

Wonderful verse....absolutely loved it!

WinterFawn




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