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Array ( [sid] => 56137 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dynamite [time] => 2004-07-14 09:36:14 [hometext] => My temper has often caused me problems, I am awaiting a counceling appt for anger managent, as it is beginning to destroy the love I share with Mark... [bodytext] => I am like a stick of dynamite,
Light my fuse and my temper ignites,
I have to say my fuse is not very long,
You will know when you’ve done me wrong.

Anger pumps around my veins,
Stops my feeling any of my pains,
Sometimes I find it impossible to control,
It consumes me and swallows me whole.

My blood comes to the boil with such ease,
My trigger goes off with the slightest squeeze,
I am just like a loaded gun,
In adrenalin I find my fun.

Like a volcano ready to erupt,
Filled with anger my feelings are corrupt,
I look like a butterfly but sting like a bee,
This rage has long become a part of me.

A ticking time bomb ready to go,
A big explosion ready to blow,
To have a temper is such a burden,
Who controls who I am not certain?

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Dynamite

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:36:14 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I am like a stick of dynamite,
Light my fuse and my temper ignites,
I have to say my fuse is not very long,
You will know when you’ve done me wrong.

Anger pumps around my veins,
Stops my feeling any of my pains,
Sometimes I find it impossible to control,
It consumes me and swallows me whole.

My blood comes to the boil with such ease,
My trigger goes off with the slightest squeeze,
I am just like a loaded gun,
In adrenalin I find my fun.

Like a volcano ready to erupt,
Filled with anger my feelings are corrupt,
I look like a butterfly but sting like a bee,
This rage has long become a part of me.

A ticking time bomb ready to go,
A big explosion ready to blow,
To have a temper is such a burden,
Who controls who I am not certain?

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-14 09:36:14]
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Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:10:34 AM AEST
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Everyone has temper problems sometimes. You've expressed yours very nicely.

Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:21:18 AM AEST
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I certainly hope you can find help. Inability to control your anger can destroy everything around you.

Rita

Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:36:49 AM AEST
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Gosh, I'm familiar with this scenario. My father, son, and husband have all had this problem. You are taking the right steps. Keep writing, too. It makes a big difference. I'll be praying for you. Keep me up to date.
Stitch

Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:31:05 PM AEST
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Like Stitch, I'm a woman (/girl) of prayer as well. I can only wish you the best.
I also encourage that you continue to write about it. It seems to be helpful and you're SO good at it.
Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:36:57 PM AEST
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Very well-expressed....good luck in curbing your temper. :)

Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:50:20 PM AEST
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Wow.. my dear cool down..please don't blast
venkat

Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:25:17 AM AEST
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This was expressed very well.....good write....
Jenni

Re: Dynamite (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:12:51 AM AEST
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Its already a step forward admittin u have an anger problem, so keep it up hun. you have expressed your emotion amazingly as usual. keep writing it is something you are definitely talented at.

peace be with you
Gen xx

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