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Death the seperation of the incorporeal part of a living person,
the soul from the physical part.

And time becomming the moving unreal reflection of eternity

I was awakened to remember

Guardian spirits to my left and right

Like in the movie theater, displays of deeds, good and bad
to other souls which have entered after death.

I saw reality due to liberation from the distraction and
inaccuracies of the physical sense

With no limitation to Learning,Vision,Hearing,Touch,Taste,and Smell

I went through the dark,black vacum with utter peace and quiet,

To the valley of the shadow of death

Now i understand the words of the old testament

"Thy dead men shall live,together with my dead body shall they arise.
Awake and sing,ye that dwell in dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs,
and the earth shall cast out the dead."

"And many of them that sleep in the dust of the earth shall awake,
some to everlasting life and some to shame and everlasting contempt."

Far beyond the valley of the shadow of death.

Though i fear no evil,but am hunted by the memories of
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THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH

Contributed by buccaneer on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:50:53 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Rolling from the planes and dimensions of reality other than the sensible,physical world.

Death the seperation of the incorporeal part of a living person,
the soul from the physical part.

And time becomming the moving unreal reflection of eternity

I was awakened to remember

Guardian spirits to my left and right

Like in the movie theater, displays of deeds, good and bad
to other souls which have entered after death.

I saw reality due to liberation from the distraction and
inaccuracies of the physical sense

With no limitation to Learning,Vision,Hearing,Touch,Taste,and Smell

I went through the dark,black vacum with utter peace and quiet,

To the valley of the shadow of death

Now i understand the words of the old testament

"Thy dead men shall live,together with my dead body shall they arise.
Awake and sing,ye that dwell in dust: for thy dew is as the dew of herbs,
and the earth shall cast out the dead."

"And many of them that sleep in the dust of the earth shall awake,
some to everlasting life and some to shame and everlasting contempt."

Far beyond the valley of the shadow of death.

Though i fear no evil,but am hunted by the memories of
the valley of the shadow of death...

Copyright © buccaneer ... [ 2004-07-14 06:50:53]
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Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:04:41 AM AEST
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You write strongly and choose your words wisely. Keep writing.

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:07:23 AM AEST
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A good write,well done.

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:33:36 AM AEST
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This is an interesting write. Compare this to my poem "On the shore of the ocean" and tell me what you see

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by drummerchic18 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 08:09:34 AM AEST
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very good word usuage and placement. Excellent job. I can really feel the emotion here.

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:54:49 AM AEST
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This is extremely sage and beautiful. You do write to the heart.

Rita

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:56:41 AM AEST
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Keep them coming, my young friend....
Jen

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 07:26:47 PM AEST
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very interesting and beautifully written great job

Brandy

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:35:36 PM AEST
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'And thus i shall walk into the valley of the shadow of death and i shall fear no evil because i walk with a tincture of evil myself, i am diseased, different, i am immortal.'

As soon as i read this that popped into my head, from a novel on vampires lol

Interesting write, i love the vivid imagery and fantasy, rather inspiring also i feel the urge for something similar myself, though the only crit i would make is the structure is somewhat overwhelming at first but is quiet well shrouded by the content, good show

Best line.. 'I saw reality due to liberation from the distraction and
inaccuracies of the physical sense'

Luke

Re: THE VALLEY OF THE SHADOW OF DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 05:54:44 PM AEST
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This is a great poem....i liked it alot....awesome job...im glad u liked my poem as well

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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