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Array ( [sid] => 56113 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Way To Explain It [time] => 2004-07-14 02:32:21 [hometext] => please just read then vote and comment thanks [bodytext] =>
I can’t explain this feeling
When I look up at the ceiling

I love you so much
And I love when we touch

We talk about making love
You are my angel from above

I don’t know how to explain this
But I love the way you kiss

I’ve been thinking maybe
I wanna have a baby

I know I am still at such a young age
And babies can give a lot of rage

They can be a lot of pain
But I believe that baby would keep me sane

I am ready to take this big step
Thinking of the memories we’ve kept

I know what the future brings
It brings nothing but good things

I don’t know what you would say
Or if you would run away

But all I know is I want a baby
And I was thinking maybe

We could make one
Cause I really want a son
BrownEyedTears06: If not a son than a baby girl
She could be our world

Baby, I love you so much
And I love when we touch

So what do you say
Please don’t run away

I don’t mean to make such a fright
Just please be with me tonight

If you don’t want a baby
Than we could just maybe

Make the sweetest love
Cause you are my angel from above

I’m sorry to say this
But I love the way you kiss

So what do you say
Or do you want to wait until another day

Please just hold me tight
And say you’ll make love to me tonight [comments] => 6 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 21 [informant] => lilmissy086 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

A Way To Explain It

Contributed by lilmissy086 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:32:21 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I can’t explain this feeling
When I look up at the ceiling

I love you so much
And I love when we touch

We talk about making love
You are my angel from above

I don’t know how to explain this
But I love the way you kiss

I’ve been thinking maybe
I wanna have a baby

I know I am still at such a young age
And babies can give a lot of rage

They can be a lot of pain
But I believe that baby would keep me sane

I am ready to take this big step
Thinking of the memories we’ve kept

I know what the future brings
It brings nothing but good things

I don’t know what you would say
Or if you would run away

But all I know is I want a baby
And I was thinking maybe

We could make one
Cause I really want a son
BrownEyedTears06: If not a son than a baby girl
She could be our world

Baby, I love you so much
And I love when we touch

So what do you say
Please don’t run away

I don’t mean to make such a fright
Just please be with me tonight

If you don’t want a baby
Than we could just maybe

Make the sweetest love
Cause you are my angel from above

I’m sorry to say this
But I love the way you kiss

So what do you say
Or do you want to wait until another day

Please just hold me tight
And say you’ll make love to me tonight

Copyright Â© lilmissy086 ... [ 2004-07-14 02:32:21]
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Re: A Way To Explain It (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:34:40 AM AEST
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Good rhyme: nice write
Cheers Robert.

Re: A Way To Explain It (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 04:05:50 AM AEST
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Nice poem very emotional it seems.

Re: A Way To Explain It (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:00:26 AM AEST
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As long as your 'such a young age' is legal, then the choice is yours.

Good luck.

Re: A Way To Explain It (User Rating: 1 )
by buccaneer on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:00:22 AM AEST
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i guess you have just given me the right answers to my problems and i will tell you more if only she agrees.
this is lovely.

Re: A Way To Explain It (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:14:16 AM AEST
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Yes, your poem does rhyme well. Nice write. Keep writing.

Re: A Way To Explain It (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:03:43 AM AEST
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After reading your author's notes I wasn't sure I wanted to read your poem bec. normally if someone specifically asks I tend to shy away from that person.

But I was impressed with your poem and I thought the rhyming was excellent.

I hope all your dreams come true. : )

Kie

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