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never pure, until the end
Contributed by
torn_skirt
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:41:43 PM in AEST
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Her tatered soul,
dirty hands.
worn face,
and love bands.
Lonely fingers,
Lifeless eyes.
No one ever hears
the sad girls cries.
Her broken thoughts
never peiced back together.
Cant remember times
when she was better.
All she knows
is what hurts most of all.
And it wont go away,
until the day she falls.
six feet under
head first.
She hasnt felt this pure
since birth.
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torn_skirt
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2004-07-13 16:41:43]
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Re: never pure, until the end
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 04:43:55 PM AEST
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| another great write. you have a true talent to express yourself through words. |
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Re: never pure, until the end
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:04:16 PM AEST
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wow very good very emotional. The last lines were very haunting.
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Re: never pure, until the end
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 10:06:58 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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