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Intimacy
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 01:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ah, my love speak to me and say in my
ear sweet things I desire of thee this night.
Come lie with me in my embrace with sigh
until regret doth see morn's early light.
Let these two candles be out ending day
and drapes fast be drawn closed around recline.
Near thy heart close to thee here I will stay,
enjoying marriage place, God's great design.
The cares and schemes of day's past time are laid
aside as I do breathe near thee at ease.
All woes are like the fallen leaves thus made
to be swept clean with rake from under trees.
Forever may it be that we can take
such precious time together while awake.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2002-10-25 13:15:00]
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Re: Intimacy
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by Poetic_Angel on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 02:14:45 PM AEST
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| ur poem is unique in a good way!!! i like it a lot! it sounds like u used a touch of shakespeare's "talk" |
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Re: Intimacy
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 02:21:53 PM AEST
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This kind of poem is called a Shakespearean Sonnet in Iambic Pentameter meter. The setting is Sixteenth century and portrays the love between a man and his wife.
Regards,
Ramfire
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Re: Intimacy
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 04:33:01 AM AEST
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Beautifully written expression
of your love, i enjoyed reading this
very creative and romantic
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Intimacy
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:13:58 AM AEST
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I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I'll try my best to write another.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Intimacy
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 04:53:00 AM AEST
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Wow, I love this poem. It is truely the best i have seem. I really love your style. Keep writing.
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Re: Intimacy
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by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:41:06 AM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words- they mean so very much to me. I hope I can write other poems that you'll like.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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