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"Do you wanna see more?"
"Do you think I'm hot?"
sanity is long gone
as i whispered
girl don't you ever stop,
no way to conceal
I want what she's got
no way I'm gonna
let her
get away.
On fire with desire
feels so good
must be a sin
wanna make it last
do it again and agian,
this is me
deep
in fantasy!!
On my knees
worshipping the goddess
dreaming of a taste
of a kiss
feels so good it must be a sin
oh fantasy
sweet fantasy.
Wanna do it again and again...
on my knees
worshipping the goddess
I want a taste
yes I wanna kiss,
this is me
deep
in fantasy.

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Deep In Fantasy

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:35:36 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

She asked
"Do you wanna see more?"
"Do you think I'm hot?"
sanity is long gone
as i whispered
girl don't you ever stop,
no way to conceal
I want what she's got
no way I'm gonna
let her
get away.
On fire with desire
feels so good
must be a sin
wanna make it last
do it again and agian,
this is me
deep
in fantasy!!
On my knees
worshipping the goddess
dreaming of a taste
of a kiss
feels so good it must be a sin
oh fantasy
sweet fantasy.
Wanna do it again and again...
on my knees
worshipping the goddess
I want a taste
yes I wanna kiss,
this is me
deep
in fantasy.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-07-13 13:35:36]
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Re: Deep In Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:48:53 PM AEST
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great write...

pixie xx

Re: Deep In Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:42:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful Fantasy indeed! Oh how I wish I could conjure up such fantasties......but the minute I realize it's not true.......it's gone! Must work on that one a while.....but you have it down "Pat"
Wonderful emotional write.
Poetic
hugs
consue

Re: Deep In Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 02:56:26 AM AEST
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Hot diggady this one is hot!
A naturall born luver u r.
heck u done cranked up my fantasy to flowing.
As usual this takes my breathe away with such passion.
luv, huggs, smiles, longings,
emy

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