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Array ( [sid] => 55969 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Calling For Intervention [time] => 2004-07-13 10:14:23 [hometext] => Another series of haiku, this one five. Another time to ask for help, because this time Earth can't help. [bodytext] => I'm asking again
For the heavens' attention;
I've been needing it.

There's plenty evil
But angels are welcome here;
I've been needing one.

Could you spare some wings?
Flying on my own's been hard;
I've been needing some.

I lost my angel
Could use angels that don't fall;
I've been needing help.

I've managed to slip
More times than I'd intended;
I've been needing grace. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 17 [informant] => Eve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Haiku )

Calling For Intervention

Contributed by Eve on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:14:23 AM in AEST
Topic: Haiku

I'm asking again
For the heavens' attention;
I've been needing it.

There's plenty evil
But angels are welcome here;
I've been needing one.

Could you spare some wings?
Flying on my own's been hard;
I've been needing some.

I lost my angel
Could use angels that don't fall;
I've been needing help.

I've managed to slip
More times than I'd intended;
I've been needing grace.

Copyright © Eve ... [ 2004-07-13 10:14:23]
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Re: Calling For Intervention (User Rating: 1 )
by frohemiasweetie on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:23:05 AM AEST
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I loved those. I always thought that haiku were supposed to leave lots of room for interpretation, but you have chained yours together to convey a more easily digestable message. Great.

Re: Calling For Intervention (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 08:31:27 AM AEST
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Well written, with a spiritual keen.

Interesting and a worthwhile read.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: Calling For Intervention (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:48:56 PM AEST
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very nicely done.

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