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Array ( [sid] => 55947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Talk to me [time] => 2004-07-13 05:22:55 [hometext] => I am not exactly sure how to describe this one except the hope between two friends when one asks forgiveness [bodytext] => Tell me I'm not the only one hurting
Tell me you still want to be my friend
Quench the fear that threatens to unrest me.
Give me answers that I comprehend
Do not trample on the prayers I've said here
Quietly walk with me through the park
I know how I've messed up
I have not given up
What I need is for you to talk to me.

Show me love as given from the scriptures
Sing songs with me when I have success
Take me to the hieght of grandios mountains
Help me to keep changed in recklessness
Quench the temptation that e're surrounds me
Please help me to put my mind at ease
I know how I've messed up
I am sorry for what I have done
I hope though that you will talk to me.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
If by my actions I have hurt any one; I am sorry
My words may not be enough to erase my actions
Yet I ask that you do not withdraw from me
Forgiveness will form the ties that heal us
And our friend ship will be renewed as if I had not trespassed.
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Talk to me

Contributed by Archie on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:22:55 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Tell me I'm not the only one hurting
Tell me you still want to be my friend
Quench the fear that threatens to unrest me.
Give me answers that I comprehend
Do not trample on the prayers I've said here
Quietly walk with me through the park
I know how I've messed up
I have not given up
What I need is for you to talk to me.

Show me love as given from the scriptures
Sing songs with me when I have success
Take me to the hieght of grandios mountains
Help me to keep changed in recklessness
Quench the temptation that e're surrounds me
Please help me to put my mind at ease
I know how I've messed up
I am sorry for what I have done
I hope though that you will talk to me.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
If by my actions I have hurt any one; I am sorry
My words may not be enough to erase my actions
Yet I ask that you do not withdraw from me
Forgiveness will form the ties that heal us
And our friend ship will be renewed as if I had not trespassed.

Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-07-13 05:22:55]
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Re: Talk to me (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:54:29 AM AEST
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A true heartfelt write..beautifully touching. venkat

Re: Talk to me (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:52:57 AM AEST
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this is truly beautiful and full of sorrow. i do not know what you did to need the cause for forgiveness but your friend should forgive and forget. this is truly heartfelt.

much love and hugs
gen xx

Re: Talk to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:24:04 AM AEST
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How could anyone not forgive you (if indeed it is warranted) after reading such a beautiful and sincere wrrite!!!
Hugs from this friend...
Jenni

Re: Talk to me (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 09:54:45 AM AEST
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i agree with all the other comments, strongly agrees with jenni_ks.
this was in fact beautiful and emotional.
written nicely. i liked this.
i hope all goes well with your friend and soon.
Arden

Re: Talk to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 10:32:52 AM AEST
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The sincere emotion here pleads for forgiveness and I cannot imagine anyone not granting it and trying hard to understand.

Rita

Re: Talk to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 01:00:13 PM AEST
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very touching. another one that i can sadly relate to. acceptance of a person includes mistakes also. forgive but never forget. excellent write. =]

Re: Talk to me (User Rating: 1 )
by pastiche247 on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:06:57 PM AEST
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So much pain!
So much honesty to recognize it and such bravery to publish it.

Very powerful.

Well done!

Best,
p

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