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Array ( [sid] => 55919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spilt Heart [time] => 2004-07-12 23:44:51 [hometext] => this was when i had to choose between 2 guys as u can tell [bodytext] => what should i do
when my heart is torn between two
should i choose the one who looks me in the eyes
and lies
or the one who cares
and tries to fight away my fears
the one i dont trust
could only be lust
the other could prove
to be true love
i wish i could just die
and leave this decsion behind
never having to chose
never having to break one heart
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Spilt Heart

Contributed by punkprincess6689 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



what should i do
when my heart is torn between two
should i choose the one who looks me in the eyes
and lies
or the one who cares
and tries to fight away my fears
the one i dont trust
could only be lust
the other could prove
to be true love
i wish i could just die
and leave this decsion behind
never having to chose
never having to break one heart




Copyright © punkprincess6689 ... [ 2004-07-12 23:44:51]
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Re: Spilt Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:51:43 AM AEST
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Hopefully you chose the one who cares! I wish I had your problems! hehe...Nicely done!


Re: Spilt Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 12:57:49 AM AEST
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damn - why do the guys that are bad for us
even register??? why do they always seem
more exciting? i hope u are able to make
your choice and that it's the right one...


Re: Spilt Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Adriean on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:06:26 AM AEST
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I have been in that exact position and it isn't glamorous to have to guys you care about to choose between. Beautiful


Re: Spilt Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:59:32 PM AEST
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I Like This. Just Follow Your Own Heart


Re: Spilt Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:42:42 PM AEST
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good show of emotion....still wonder why girls chose the "bad guy" haha guess thats just me being jealous




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