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Gouging them with my fingernails
Would you cry invisible tears for me?

If I cut out your wicked tongue
Slicing it with my blade
Would you scream silently as your bled?

If I sewed your gaping mouth shut
Stitching together your lying lips
Would you curse me as you bleed to death?

Therefore, as I whisper in your ear, as I smile wickedly
Telling you I will no longer cry invisible tears
Screaming silently into the blackened night
As you bleed me until the final shred of my sanity disappears.

I step back looking at your helpless pathetic body
Bound exquisitely in your favorite torturing chair
Imagining my handiwork yet to become
& the pain your have yet to endure.
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Torturous Revenge

Contributed by delusionalangelicsub on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:51:37 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

If I ripped out your evil eyes
Gouging them with my fingernails
Would you cry invisible tears for me?

If I cut out your wicked tongue
Slicing it with my blade
Would you scream silently as your bled?

If I sewed your gaping mouth shut
Stitching together your lying lips
Would you curse me as you bleed to death?

Therefore, as I whisper in your ear, as I smile wickedly
Telling you I will no longer cry invisible tears
Screaming silently into the blackened night
As you bleed me until the final shred of my sanity disappears.

I step back looking at your helpless pathetic body
Bound exquisitely in your favorite torturing chair
Imagining my handiwork yet to become
& the pain your have yet to endure.

Copyright © delusionalangelicsub ... [ 2004-07-12 14:51:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Torturous Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:31:39 PM AEST
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very dark...deep revenge is sweet!

Re: Torturous Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:24:11 PM AEST
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very twisted...but i like it....great work

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Torturous Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:01:28 PM AEST
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Oh this one is brilliant, twisted yes but then again, i've had thoughts that bad if not worse. its fun and in its own weird way it helps.

thanks for sharing this.

Take care
- Becca

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