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Array ( [sid] => 55852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My dead note. [time] => 2004-07-12 14:47:53 [hometext] => I’m feeling like dirt and wanting to place a gun on my for head… [bodytext] => Go ***** ignoring me then.
Make me feel more like *****!
All I ask is for you to care for me.
Why can’t you see I’m feeling like ***(*?

My life’s like a racing rollercoaster.
My feet don’t touch the ground.
One day I’ll disappear for ever!
So then I’ll never be found.

I can’t take this pain inside me.
I’m feeling so deprest!
I should have broken your nose Jasmine!
‘Coz then I wouldn’t be so stressed.

And stuck-up mother,
Is just making me feel worse.
Maybe it’s all my fault,
‘Coz since birth I’ve had this curse!

I just know I wish I was dead.
Away from the world, away from my head.
‘Coz I can’t face the flames,
And all the threatening names!
And if I fight back I’ll only get done.
… So now to my head,
I place a GUN…

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My dead note.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:47:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Go ***** ignoring me then.
Make me feel more like *****!
All I ask is for you to care for me.
Why can’t you see I’m feeling like ***(*?

My life’s like a racing rollercoaster.
My feet don’t touch the ground.
One day I’ll disappear for ever!
So then I’ll never be found.

I can’t take this pain inside me.
I’m feeling so deprest!
I should have broken your nose Jasmine!
‘Coz then I wouldn’t be so stressed.

And stuck-up mother,
Is just making me feel worse.
Maybe it’s all my fault,
‘Coz since birth I’ve had this curse!

I just know I wish I was dead.
Away from the world, away from my head.
‘Coz I can’t face the flames,
And all the threatening names!
And if I fight back I’ll only get done.
… So now to my head,
I place a GUN…

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-07-12 14:47:53]
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Re: My dead note. (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:59:29 PM AEST
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I know that it's hard, but please don't do that because there are people that care about you. My friend helped me out with this. He said that if you kill yourself, you've only let the people who treat you like dirt win. And you don't want to give them the satisfaction of victory. Please hang in there. Best of luck!
Katie

Re: My dead note. (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:37:49 PM AEST
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you captured this perfectly but i have to say im sorry i know its hard i went throught this to but one day my friend called me up crying and begging me not to kill myself and that her cousin had just committed suicide ( even more sad his brother is in a mental hospital because of it) she said how selfish it was to commit suicide and i that really stuck it is pretty damn selfish

Re: My dead note. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ceres on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:45:18 PM AEST
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Never really been there myself, but I can see where you're coming from. Just don't give in to it, k? Anyway, on a happier note, EXCELLENT! Amazing! Very good! etc. Keep writing, please!
- Ceres

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