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Array ( [sid] => 5581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Faith In Being Betrayed [time] => 2002-10-25 08:15:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look out, the life that you have is defective
in it's utmost entirety
Speak out, the breathe that I have, time is severed
in all of it's sanctity
Love the pain that you share, and never really care
about the facts that you believe
When it all comes down to, there's nothing to do
with the faith of being betrayed

The light in the sky feels too bright
it's pulling me too close
The fear inside you, lies are all true
you're lying straight to me
And so I feel it, distant survalance
of the times I never knew

Fortify the deadly sky
Cure the day of night
and believe that nothing's there
While you tumble and you fall
Slip up and you crawl
and grovel at my feet

Picture up the place, board it with disgrace
masking what you hate the most
Dreams are are never here, only all too real
as they figure out your life
Cry and mourn the past, feeling the wet grass
forever for experience
But when it comes down to it,
there's nothing you can do about it
Your faith of being betrayed [comments] => 1 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 13 [informant] => InexactExactness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Faith In Being Betrayed

Contributed by InexactExactness on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 08:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Look out, the life that you have is defective
in it's utmost entirety
Speak out, the breathe that I have, time is severed
in all of it's sanctity
Love the pain that you share, and never really care
about the facts that you believe
When it all comes down to, there's nothing to do
with the faith of being betrayed

The light in the sky feels too bright
it's pulling me too close
The fear inside you, lies are all true
you're lying straight to me
And so I feel it, distant survalance
of the times I never knew

Fortify the deadly sky
Cure the day of night
and believe that nothing's there
While you tumble and you fall
Slip up and you crawl
and grovel at my feet

Picture up the place, board it with disgrace
masking what you hate the most
Dreams are are never here, only all too real
as they figure out your life
Cry and mourn the past, feeling the wet grass
forever for experience
But when it comes down to it,
there's nothing you can do about it
Your faith of being betrayed

Copyright © InexactExactness ... [ 2002-10-25 08:15:00]
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Re: Faith In Being Betrayed (User Rating: 1 )
by amos on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 09:42:13 AM AEST
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I think hate is one of the most powerful emotions. Great write.

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