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Array ( [sid] => 55781 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a simple wish [time] => 2004-07-11 23:33:18 [hometext] => to my first true love [bodytext] => i wish to hold you in my arms and never you go, to let time pass us bye
to hold you in my arms until the day i die

i wish to hear your every word and see your every smile
to hold you in my arms and kiss you for awhile

i wish to look into your eyes as you look into mine
to hold you in my arms until the end of time

i wish to massage you with my hands
and sooth you with my words
just tell me what to do
to prove my love to you

i wish to take you by your heart, and hold it close to mine
to never be apart, and let your love forever shine
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a simple wish

Contributed by co_cane13 on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:33:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i wish to hold you in my arms and never you go, to let time pass us bye
to hold you in my arms until the day i die

i wish to hear your every word and see your every smile
to hold you in my arms and kiss you for awhile

i wish to look into your eyes as you look into mine
to hold you in my arms until the end of time

i wish to massage you with my hands
and sooth you with my words
just tell me what to do
to prove my love to you

i wish to take you by your heart, and hold it close to mine
to never be apart, and let your love forever shine

Copyright © co_cane13 ... [ 2004-07-11 23:33:18]
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Re: a simple wish (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:36:27 PM AEST
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Your first true love is very lucky to have u.
Heavenly beautifull.
huggs,
emy

Re: a simple wish (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:15:38 AM AEST
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this is such a loving, caring write.

pixie xx

Re: a simple wish (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:04:55 PM AEST
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I love your work so much. I can relate to all of it cause we are in the same position except I am the one on the other side of the situation. Keep up the wonderful writes! I know its hard but we can hang in there together!

Love~n~smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: a simple wish (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:05:05 PM AEST
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I love your work so much. I can relate to all of it cause we are in the same position except I am the one on the other side of the situation. Keep up the wonderful writes! I know its hard but we can hang in there together!

Love~n~smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Emily

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