Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:06:04 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 55776 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sore Tooth [time] => 2004-07-11 23:15:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I lie in this chair
I hear drills and suction
Yet my only thought
Is of your seduction

If there ever was a contest
Aphrodite dare not compete
With your godlike beauty
And your heart so sweet

Your lustrous lips
Your jade green eyes
I now pray to the gods
That you'll soon be mine

But if sooner turns to later
And my bones grow weak
Your love and affection
Will be all I seek

So I hope to myself
That your eyes fill with joyous tears
As I deliver these words
To your delicate ears [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

My Sore Tooth

Contributed by tin on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:15:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As I lie in this chair
I hear drills and suction
Yet my only thought
Is of your seduction

If there ever was a contest
Aphrodite dare not compete
With your godlike beauty
And your heart so sweet

Your lustrous lips
Your jade green eyes
I now pray to the gods
That you'll soon be mine

But if sooner turns to later
And my bones grow weak
Your love and affection
Will be all I seek

So I hope to myself
That your eyes fill with joyous tears
As I deliver these words
To your delicate ears

Copyright © tin ... [ 2004-07-11 23:15:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: My Sore Tooth (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:02:01 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

HMMM INTERESTING WRITE.

Re: My Sore Tooth (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:21:49 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is pretty good! If slightly strange at the thought of finding inspiration in a dentist's chair...
Nice work.
Andrew

Re: My Sore Tooth (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:04:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Welcome to YPDC, tin!

I agree... interesting... and - um - a bit different in title and first stanza. But, I suppose, the mind doesn't always wait for a romantic setting to wonder off to romantic thoughts.

Very sweet. Thanks for sharing this!
SNM

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com