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Array ( [sid] => 55748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => While She Slept [time] => 2004-07-11 17:52:18 [hometext] => This is about my baby cousin, who died when she was just 2 months old. we miss you Yasmine!! [bodytext] => While she slept
He touched her shoulder
Held her hand
Then led her to the promise land
He took her to his palace
Where she now is blessed
She is free to fly
With all the baby angels in the sky
We will miss her sweet smile
The innocent gaze upon her face
We will miss her cooing voice
As she tried to speak to us

God took you to a better place
Where evil can never touch you
You have now joined the choir
Who praises God forevermore
You have become a new star in the sky
Who will light up bright in the night
You now have the blessing
Of gazing into his loving face

Farwell our Angel
We will miss you
Oh, so very much
Yet we know one day
We will see you on the other side
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 38 [informant] => dreamer_jenny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )

While She Slept

Contributed by dreamer_jenny on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:52:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

While she slept
He touched her shoulder
Held her hand
Then led her to the promise land
He took her to his palace
Where she now is blessed
She is free to fly
With all the baby angels in the sky
We will miss her sweet smile
The innocent gaze upon her face
We will miss her cooing voice
As she tried to speak to us

God took you to a better place
Where evil can never touch you
You have now joined the choir
Who praises God forevermore
You have become a new star in the sky
Who will light up bright in the night
You now have the blessing
Of gazing into his loving face

Farwell our Angel
We will miss you
Oh, so very much
Yet we know one day
We will see you on the other side

Copyright © dreamer_jenny ... [ 2004-07-11 17:52:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: While She Slept (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 06:16:40 PM AEST
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I am very sorry for your loss. Your poem is bueatiful.

Re: While She Slept (User Rating: 1 )
by darkfairy1188 on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 06:55:13 PM AEST
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awww... this poem is very sweet and very well done.

Re: While She Slept (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:53:17 PM AEST
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How extraordinarily beautiful this tribute is to her. God must have needed a very special angel with him. Your piece of work here is so loving and strong. Bless you.

Rita

Re: While She Slept (User Rating: 1 )
by Pollo_Picante1120 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:25:18 PM AEST
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Dis powem is reeley gooed onley dat JEW COPEEYED IT FRUM DA FEWNARAL!!!! NO ay yam gus gokane wit ju jenay. Ju shoowed mayke sum mor powemes, ju deam hoe dat ay rrayke mi jard wit, gus playang, ju no ay luv ju. Here I'll give something to write about.......A latin lover and his wife seperated by a war....make me cry!! Well g2g peace out nucka!!!!
Luv your cuzin,
Heather boo boo

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