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Array ( [sid] => 55662 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im sorry. [time] => 2004-07-10 22:07:18 [hometext] => This is an apology to my step brother Dan. We are cool now. I was an imature ***. [bodytext] => You tried to include me
We would chat all the time
I am sorry for decieving you
I cant belive I didnt notice you

You would ask me to go with you
A party here or there
All I would want to do
Is smoke a bowl or two
I knew you thought I just liked your sis
But I could care for her like *****
She offered me one thing I seem to think I missed
But now I have no wanting to do again

Now I have no wanting of
The power of the bud
Thank you for taking me back
As a not of just a family but a friend in one
I wish I could turn back time
Although its been so long since my last time
I wont revert back to once a bad habit
For your company is that much better

Our talks about music
The games we share to play
I am so proud to say
That you are my friend [comments] => 3 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 50 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => Moderator 9 7/10/04 Bleep word [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

Im sorry.

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:07:18 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

You tried to include me
We would chat all the time
I am sorry for decieving you
I cant belive I didnt notice you

You would ask me to go with you
A party here or there
All I would want to do
Is smoke a bowl or two
I knew you thought I just liked your sis
But I could care for her like *****
She offered me one thing I seem to think I missed
But now I have no wanting to do again

Now I have no wanting of
The power of the bud
Thank you for taking me back
As a not of just a family but a friend in one
I wish I could turn back time
Although its been so long since my last time
I wont revert back to once a bad habit
For your company is that much better

Our talks about music
The games we share to play
I am so proud to say
That you are my friend

Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-07-10 22:07:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Im sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:20:52 PM AEST
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That was nice. I'm sure it is appreciated.

J~

Re: Im sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:03:25 PM AEST
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hey babe. good poem. and a wise decision. luv ya bunchez.
~allyson~

Re: Im sorry. (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:12:10 PM AEST
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good write i'm sure he accepted your apology without thinking twice about it, i know i would have. great job

Brandy

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