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Oh, Soul, aching, reaping, waiting for a time
When a Suzerain Timelord, might chime
Hiss Orris Time-piece, and set thy Soul free
To eventually end up in a myriad eternity
A Lilac lamp, shines, waiting for thee.

EARTH AND BODY
Three days after Lammas was born to thee
Earth laden misty fair, Tullurian am I
Of a nature, lifeless, in decline, ready to diminish
The lamp, that awaits the sublime entrance
Of what lasting vestige, shall my Soul leave to thee?

HEAVEN AND EARTH
A eminent solemn entrance, was as foretold
Ethereal waters, Cherubic Angels divine behold
Oh Diamond firmament of celestial Sky
Of this does the Lilac lamp, testify
A prose of ashes Terrene, have I left for thee.

© Robert Kilpatrick. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 62 [informant] => robertkilpatrick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

OH SOUL

Contributed by robertkilpatrick on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

BODY AND SOUL
Oh, Soul, aching, reaping, waiting for a time
When a Suzerain Timelord, might chime
Hiss Orris Time-piece, and set thy Soul free
To eventually end up in a myriad eternity
A Lilac lamp, shines, waiting for thee.

EARTH AND BODY
Three days after Lammas was born to thee
Earth laden misty fair, Tullurian am I
Of a nature, lifeless, in decline, ready to diminish
The lamp, that awaits the sublime entrance
Of what lasting vestige, shall my Soul leave to thee?

HEAVEN AND EARTH
A eminent solemn entrance, was as foretold
Ethereal waters, Cherubic Angels divine behold
Oh Diamond firmament of celestial Sky
Of this does the Lilac lamp, testify
A prose of ashes Terrene, have I left for thee.

© Robert Kilpatrick.

Copyright Â© robertkilpatrick ... [ 2004-07-10 20:31:47]
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Re: OH SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:08:14 PM AEST
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The themes for each stanza is a nice touch to the poem. This is a wonderful write. :)

Re: OH SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:21:54 AM AEST
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Good poem.

Re: OH SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:22:38 AM AEST
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Oh...imagery is good..but I feel they lack some clarity..sorry..I don't mean to discourage you..but
Keep writing on..I will be very much pleased if you can go through few of my recent poems....Om Namah Sivaaya....venkat

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