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Array ( [sid] => 55633 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seldom Walked [time] => 2004-07-10 17:01:43 [hometext] => 6-5-04 Missing him. (oh, and it's 22 lines long) [bodytext] => Minutes and days and hours have ticked by
Time without you drags on and on
I watch the clock tick and the sun set,
Then I miserably glare through blurry eyes as it rises again.
One minute is one minute too long
When I am not near you.
I am impatient, excited, and anxious to hear
Your gentle voice.
Your voice
Your voice melts me and warms me and heals me
As it soothes the boisterous waters that have
Boiled me to a hot misery.
Your voice moisturizes my scaly, cracked
Heart.
How I long for such surreal restoration
But I know it is a love, a dream, a hope
Worth any wait which life demands.
My entire being loves you and only you.
So thank you.
For the amazing road you've taken me on.
The road of love--
A road seldom walked. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 414 [topic] => 2 [informant] => eatfresh22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Seldom Walked

Contributed by eatfresh22 on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Minutes and days and hours have ticked by
Time without you drags on and on
I watch the clock tick and the sun set,
Then I miserably glare through blurry eyes as it rises again.
One minute is one minute too long
When I am not near you.
I am impatient, excited, and anxious to hear
Your gentle voice.
Your voice
Your voice melts me and warms me and heals me
As it soothes the boisterous waters that have
Boiled me to a hot misery.
Your voice moisturizes my scaly, cracked
Heart.
How I long for such surreal restoration
But I know it is a love, a dream, a hope
Worth any wait which life demands.
My entire being loves you and only you.
So thank you.
For the amazing road you've taken me on.
The road of love--
A road seldom walked.

Copyright © eatfresh22 ... [ 2004-07-10 17:01:43]
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Re: Seldom Walked (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:05:14 PM AEST
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To walk with you down that path is going to be the best thing in life, well at least this one. It's more than I've dreamed of, more than I hoped for. I miss you and love you so much.
Take care, my Love.
David

Re: Seldom Walked (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:24:03 PM AEST
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May your travels be smooth and may you never get blisters on your toes as you walk the road of love.
Lots of LOVE and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Seldom Walked (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:01:46 PM AEST
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Wow! Big words for just a kid. Nice job! This was artistic. And rather far gone... but ah well. You deserve it.

A blessing on your love, Ceima.
Andrew

Re: Seldom Walked (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:44:25 AM AEST
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Carrie your writing is just incredible!

haha, 22!

Re: Seldom Walked (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:34:04 PM AEST
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Awww . . . oh, geez, you've got me all lipbitten and sniffly here. Heh . . . seriously, this is such a sweet poem; so very beautiful . . . *smiles* nicely done.

--Nora

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