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Array ( [sid] => 55629 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => words [time] => 2004-07-10 16:41:07 [hometext] => enticing, irresistable and occasionally deadly... [bodytext] => Guilty.
Staring in.
Look up to me
Then look down on me
When you've finalised your analysis.
It was the potency of the written word
That led me down the garden paths
Of so many strangers
Seductive, spontaneous - The kind of life I thrive on.
They know cold, hard numbers mean nothing to me...

A big, conspicuous target in a world of illogical logic.
Without a second thought, they've taken advantage.
In oblivion, how could I have cottoned on?
A spineless innocent with no way out
Of my dark succeptibility to find charm
Irresistable.
Irridescent, it glows to me, like some
Magical beacon of the tattered remains of
All that once appeared good and sacred to me.
Irreversible
Reaction, and then realisation:
It's too late.
But I must learn to share with my pasts
Because they are wise to my mistakes.
With them, progression is inevitable and
Eternal
With them, good karma might still be redeemable. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dolly_dagger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

words

Contributed by dolly_dagger on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Guilty.
Staring in.
Look up to me
Then look down on me
When you've finalised your analysis.
It was the potency of the written word
That led me down the garden paths
Of so many strangers
Seductive, spontaneous - The kind of life I thrive on.
They know cold, hard numbers mean nothing to me...

A big, conspicuous target in a world of illogical logic.
Without a second thought, they've taken advantage.
In oblivion, how could I have cottoned on?
A spineless innocent with no way out
Of my dark succeptibility to find charm
Irresistable.
Irridescent, it glows to me, like some
Magical beacon of the tattered remains of
All that once appeared good and sacred to me.
Irreversible
Reaction, and then realisation:
It's too late.
But I must learn to share with my pasts
Because they are wise to my mistakes.
With them, progression is inevitable and
Eternal
With them, good karma might still be redeemable.

Copyright © dolly_dagger ... [ 2004-07-10 16:41:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: words (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:47:38 PM AEST
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very interesting. =]

Re: words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 07:47:05 PM AEST
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i dont get it...but i like it. =)

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