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Array ( [sid] => 55624 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unwrapped [time] => 2004-07-10 15:46:39 [hometext] => This is a poem that i wrote when i left the love of my life... he's ment so much to me, and over the past year we've been able to work on things. He's the love of my life and always will be......... [bodytext] =>
All this time that I’ve been away from you has killed me.
I’ve tried to move on with my life without you.
But yet I still dream of you, I think about you all the time and it doesn’t seem to want to end.
I can’t help the way that I feel for you.
I can’t help the fact that I am still in love with you.
I can’t seem to move on with my life for I always move on to you.
I’m here without you and it is killing me.
I can’t wait until you and I are back together.
I want to be, you’re everything.
I know that you and I won’t ever have the relationship that we once had before.
But I want to start and end my life with you.
This time I want to be the one that you run too.
I want to be the one that you come home to each and every night.
I want to be the one who makes love to you all though the night.
You and I have gone through so much ***** in the past few years that no one should ever have to go through.
Granted that neither one of your parents or siblings got along. But baby I am to the point now that I don’t really care anymore. All I want is to be in your arms.
Feeling your body pressed against mine.
To be able to feel your strong arms wrapped around my body once again.
There are so many things that I for one miss, and there are a few things that I don’t miss.
But all in all I miss you.
I miss the way that you look at me when you’re in one of your silly boy moods.
You carry that silly boy look upon your face, as if your about to open a birthday present, knowing that that is the one thing you’ve longed for so long.
And as you unwrapped the present.
You fall in love all over again.
I want to be that gift your unwrapping..
I want to be that love that you find once again
Oh’ if I could only be yours.


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Unwrapped

Contributed by shanny0069 on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:46:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




All this time that I’ve been away from you has killed me.
I’ve tried to move on with my life without you.
But yet I still dream of you, I think about you all the time and it doesn’t seem to want to end.
I can’t help the way that I feel for you.
I can’t help the fact that I am still in love with you.
I can’t seem to move on with my life for I always move on to you.
I’m here without you and it is killing me.
I can’t wait until you and I are back together.
I want to be, you’re everything.
I know that you and I won’t ever have the relationship that we once had before.
But I want to start and end my life with you.
This time I want to be the one that you run too.
I want to be the one that you come home to each and every night.
I want to be the one who makes love to you all though the night.
You and I have gone through so much ***** in the past few years that no one should ever have to go through.
Granted that neither one of your parents or siblings got along. But baby I am to the point now that I don’t really care anymore. All I want is to be in your arms.
Feeling your body pressed against mine.
To be able to feel your strong arms wrapped around my body once again.
There are so many things that I for one miss, and there are a few things that I don’t miss.
But all in all I miss you.
I miss the way that you look at me when you’re in one of your silly boy moods.
You carry that silly boy look upon your face, as if your about to open a birthday present, knowing that that is the one thing you’ve longed for so long.
And as you unwrapped the present.
You fall in love all over again.
I want to be that gift your unwrapping..
I want to be that love that you find once again
Oh’ if I could only be yours.






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Re: Unwrapped (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:56:18 PM AEST
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I am so glad that you are working things out... i wish you all the happiness

pixie xx


Re: Unwrapped (User Rating: 1 )
by Adriean on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:05:11 PM AEST
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What a true expression of emotion. Very well written


Re: Unwrapped (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 06:49:21 PM AEST
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nice write i liked it verry much




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