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Array ( [sid] => 55621 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => goodbye my angel [time] => 2004-07-10 15:28:35 [hometext] => i wrote this to my friends my best friends and all but most of all.....i wrote this for my gardian angel....when i die and go to hell......i just want you to know...im sorry..... [bodytext] => im sorry for all the mistakes i did
im sorry i disappointed so many
im sorry i couldnt express my emotions very well
its the way i was brought up
im sorry for living
im sorry for dying
im sorry for being sorry
i could write an endless list of sorrys
but id only be sorry for writing them
my dear sweet saint
please forgive me for ending an innocient life so quick
but i could see the scars
even thought to anyone they were invisible
i couldnt feel the love from anything living
the dead only understood
they convinced me to kill
a life so easily
and i need to say
i want to tell you
it was painful
but not as painful as living this bleak life
time will tell if anyone missed me
but i doubt theyll ever notice im gone
nobody will pronounce to the world
isnt someone missing
and ill turn in my grave and actually die content
the vultures will prey on me
the worms lug in my chest
and the dirt spread itself round my body
like the vile IT i was
i now become it fully
and now i bid you
a happy goodbye
im dead
ive died
and noone cares
except you my gardian
you didnt protect me well enough
i forgive
love....
farewell....in hell as we say i will meet my doom today

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
goodbye my angel

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:28:35 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



im sorry for all the mistakes i did
im sorry i disappointed so many
im sorry i couldnt express my emotions very well
its the way i was brought up
im sorry for living
im sorry for dying
im sorry for being sorry
i could write an endless list of sorrys
but id only be sorry for writing them
my dear sweet saint
please forgive me for ending an innocient life so quick
but i could see the scars
even thought to anyone they were invisible
i couldnt feel the love from anything living
the dead only understood
they convinced me to kill
a life so easily
and i need to say
i want to tell you
it was painful
but not as painful as living this bleak life
time will tell if anyone missed me
but i doubt theyll ever notice im gone
nobody will pronounce to the world
isnt someone missing
and ill turn in my grave and actually die content
the vultures will prey on me
the worms lug in my chest
and the dirt spread itself round my body
like the vile IT i was
i now become it fully
and now i bid you
a happy goodbye
im dead
ive died
and noone cares
except you my gardian
you didnt protect me well enough
i forgive
love....
farewell....in hell as we say i will meet my doom today





Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-10 15:28:35]
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Re: goodbye my angel (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:35:57 PM AEST
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excellent now a little advice sometimes it can be hard to look up but when you do it can make all the difference


Re: goodbye my angel (User Rating: 1 )
by C2C on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:52:04 PM AEST
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Everyone has a guardian angel, but sometimes you can see them. They don't necessarily have to have wings, and you'd be surprised that maybe yourself is viewed as one. Depressing poem.
~Tuesday~




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