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Array ( [sid] => 55594 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 4:00 a.m. [time] => 2004-07-10 11:56:59 [hometext] => Written shortly after a bad night spent in cells when the Shore Patrol scooped me up. The usual crap; a marriage breakup... [bodytext] => I awaken to sense the darkness surrounding me,
The window to my soul cannot bar its blackness,
I am alone and bathed in cold sweat,
...I feel utter desolation

And morose thoughts weigh me down,
Once again I feel keen anxiety
Tearing at my soul like a jagged blade,
Opening old wounds
And leaving them to fester

I am undone once again
There is no hope...
I am defenseless against it

My stomach churns in fear
as I contemplate
my only other option...

Stoney [comments] => 3 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Stoney1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

4:00 a.m.

Contributed by Stoney1 on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:56:59 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I awaken to sense the darkness surrounding me,
The window to my soul cannot bar its blackness,
I am alone and bathed in cold sweat,
...I feel utter desolation

And morose thoughts weigh me down,
Once again I feel keen anxiety
Tearing at my soul like a jagged blade,
Opening old wounds
And leaving them to fester

I am undone once again
There is no hope...
I am defenseless against it

My stomach churns in fear
as I contemplate
my only other option...

Stoney

Copyright © Stoney1 ... [ 2004-07-10 11:56:59]
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Re: 4:00 a.m. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:40:12 PM AEST
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this just emanates loneliness... sad and beautifully written, hang in there:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: 4:00 a.m. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 06:59:35 AM AEST
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I am glad you did not pursue the other option and I hope things work out for you.

Re: 4:00 a.m. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ceres on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:44:51 AM AEST
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That sure paints a sad picture! But it was perfectly written and very descriptive.

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Ceres

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