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Array ( [sid] => 55578 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Capture Beauty [time] => 2004-07-10 06:07:36 [hometext] => This started as a love lost poem although the third verse brought it to 'a happy ending', unpexpected to myself until I wrote it. I nearly deleted it but decided I'd take advice and not do so. [bodytext] =>
I scribe all day
Seeking one true note
To seed and plant a lasting quote
These words to paint you pleasantly
So I can close my eyes

Scribbling away
Strumming out of tune
A word so dry it doesn’t bloom
Palette-- no beauty left to paint you
So I cannot close my eyes

You stroll in
A flood of words begin
I sculpt your figure flawlessly
I scrawl for you; believe in me
Your kiss is all I need
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To Capture Beauty

Contributed by Dupa on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:07:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I scribe all day
Seeking one true note
To seed and plant a lasting quote
These words to paint you pleasantly
So I can close my eyes

Scribbling away
Strumming out of tune
A word so dry it doesn’t bloom
Palette-- no beauty left to paint you
So I cannot close my eyes

You stroll in
A flood of words begin
I sculpt your figure flawlessly
I scrawl for you; believe in me
Your kiss is all I need

Copyright Â© Dupa ... [ 2004-07-10 06:07:36]
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Re: To Capture Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:50:06 AM AEST
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I am glad you didn't delete it...it is lovely.. and I like happy endings..... Thank you
Jenni

Re: To Capture Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 07:21:07 AM AEST
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I am glad you did not delete your poem. Your have a great writing style. And now you have an audience to read your poems. Great job.

Re: To Capture Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:02:46 AM AEST
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well done...

Re: To Capture Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 01:01:06 PM AEST
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This beauty deserved posting. I think you are a bit too critical of your work. We aren't usually the best ones to judge our work as artists are a bit tempermental. This is a lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it.

Rita

Re: To Capture Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:18:57 AM AEST
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Beautiful!

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