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Array ( [sid] => 5557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => °°°Patterns°°° [time] => 2002-10-24 16:15:00 [hometext] => Is this you? [bodytext] => I awake in the morning, alone in bed so cold
I look at the ceiling, as my arms unfold
I dream of your whisper, saying "i love you"
Then i turn my head, and i get down and blue

I take a deep breath as i try not to cry
I reach my hand over, on that empty pillow to slide
I turn the other way and crawl out of bed
As my heart cries for you, and tears i shed

I go to work to survive 5 days a week
It pays the bills, but i am so weak
I listen to people and how happy they are
I envy what they have, I want to shine like they are

I get in my car, i head back to my home
My head spins with thoughts, as i drive and roam
I dream you'll be there, waiting for me
With your arms open wide, a soft kiss for me

But i open the door, and nobody is home
I stand and i freeze, then i hear the phone
I hope that it's you calling to say you love me
But it's just a bill collector, wanting more money

I hang up the phone, i turn on the tv
I get lost in a world of drama, fright and fantasy
When the movies are done, i go to my bed
Where my pillow is wet, from my tears i shed

Another day gone, and i'm still dreaming
My heart is dying, my soul is screaming
I made it through another day of pain
Tomorrow i'll get up, and do it all again [comments] => 7 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 43 [informant] => OreO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
°°°Patterns°°°

Contributed by OreO on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 04:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I awake in the morning, alone in bed so cold
I look at the ceiling, as my arms unfold
I dream of your whisper, saying "i love you"
Then i turn my head, and i get down and blue

I take a deep breath as i try not to cry
I reach my hand over, on that empty pillow to slide
I turn the other way and crawl out of bed
As my heart cries for you, and tears i shed

I go to work to survive 5 days a week
It pays the bills, but i am so weak
I listen to people and how happy they are
I envy what they have, I want to shine like they are

I get in my car, i head back to my home
My head spins with thoughts, as i drive and roam
I dream you'll be there, waiting for me
With your arms open wide, a soft kiss for me

But i open the door, and nobody is home
I stand and i freeze, then i hear the phone
I hope that it's you calling to say you love me
But it's just a bill collector, wanting more money

I hang up the phone, i turn on the tv
I get lost in a world of drama, fright and fantasy
When the movies are done, i go to my bed
Where my pillow is wet, from my tears i shed

Another day gone, and i'm still dreaming
My heart is dying, my soul is screaming
I made it through another day of pain
Tomorrow i'll get up, and do it all again




Copyright © OreO ... [ 2002-10-24 16:15:00]
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Re: °°°Patterns°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 04:59:11 PM AEST
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Hey Cookie,
I've been this person before altho I'm resoabally happy without a relationship now...
Very good write!!!!!!
Great!!!!!
emy


Re: °°°Patterns°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 06:17:24 PM AEST
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This is exactly what I do ... a perfect re-enactment of my week .... so sad ... but nice to know someone else knows how I feel. Great write - love it!


Re: °°°Patterns°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by peace123 on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:08:31 PM AEST
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good write...much emotion and depth


Re: °°°Patterns°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:37:06 AM AEST
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hmm... you've been spying on me... really though... there is so much description, and it fits me to a "t". But at least, somehow, we find the courage to get out of bed... and do it all again. No matter how badly it hurts.

Great write,
Gin


Re: °°°Patterns°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 11:18:25 AM AEST
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OreO you tell it like it is,
this is painful but also an offering of hope
well written and so real
thanks


Re: °°°Patterns°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 06:51:15 AM AEST
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Very painful write..but well done!! Can feel the loneliness in this.... Please stay strong tho...life will get better...
Jenni


Re: °°°Patterns°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by darkeyedman on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:59:08 PM AEST
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i'd like to hear Jewell sing this




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