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Aurora sworn in
A Bronze gilded halo of Hawks
To meet in the Golden garden of senses
Where the Jasper river does fork.

We'll drink, excite, evoke and dine
On a very serene musing Julep
Rud Raspberry, and a sweet sweet Tulip
Reaches scenes, Nectarine Peach in your mind.

There you’ll dive deep, obtain and meet
Your inner most sugary sane secrets
That swim in a vespers verse of Violet
Beehive Moons, raining twinkling trinkets.

That swirl in a ripple of curls
Apricot kernels floating to the top
Of your mind, that cries a plural tear drop
That flows through, and become Pearls.

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PEARLS ( Peach Julep )

Contributed by RobertKilpatrick on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:49:53 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Vermilion dawn
Aurora sworn in
A Bronze gilded halo of Hawks
To meet in the Golden garden of senses
Where the Jasper river does fork.

We'll drink, excite, evoke and dine
On a very serene musing Julep
Rud Raspberry, and a sweet sweet Tulip
Reaches scenes, Nectarine Peach in your mind.

There you’ll dive deep, obtain and meet
Your inner most sugary sane secrets
That swim in a vespers verse of Violet
Beehive Moons, raining twinkling trinkets.

That swirl in a ripple of curls
Apricot kernels floating to the top
Of your mind, that cries a plural tear drop
That flows through, and become Pearls.

© Robert Kilpatrick

Copyright Â© RobertKilpatrick ... [ 2004-07-09 21:49:53]
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Re: PEARLS ( Peach Julep ) (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:29:53 PM AEST
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this is beautifully breathtaking, well woven words and excellent images:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: PEARLS ( Peach Julep ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:18:01 PM AEST
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Whoa, let me get my feet back on the ground here for a second. Robert, that is an amazing poem. It puts me in mind of my time in NOLA where I would drink Juleps (although they were mint, not peach) and sit back and laze away in the humid evening air. Your imagery is amazing. Now I just have to try a peach julep, lol

Rita

Re: PEARLS ( Peach Julep ) (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:10:46 AM AEST
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I was just blown away by this piece. Each word is precisely where it ought to be. This is definitely fine poetry.

Re: PEARLS ( Peach Julep ) (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:25:29 AM AEST
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Now, this is what I call a graat poem! Excellent work!!!

Faith

Re: PEARLS ( Peach Julep ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:25:17 AM AEST
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This is an awesome work again sultry in essence. This is definately your strength in writing.

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