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Haunted Temple
Contributed by
WestCPunk
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:33:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The crows feel comfortable here
And it's not quite so clear
Why they cherish this little girl
She haunts this temple
And is constantly mournful
Anyone who get's in her way
Anyone who may betray
Well, they won't live to see the next day
Her spirit is said
To live on for eternity
Even though she's dead
And extremely lonely
It will remain a mystery
Eternally
Why she is permanently
Punished to everlasting
Misery!
Copyright ©
WestCPunk
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2004-07-09 20:33:46]
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Re: Haunted Temple
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by waos on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:44:09 PM AEST
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| thats really good. and the picture really is cool too, adds to it. |
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Re: Haunted Temple
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by TBessant on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 02:41:54 PM AEST
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| I feel so bad for that spirit how eternal life has dealed her misery |
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Re: Haunted Temple
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by Archie on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:09:51 PM AEST
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| The picture you paint is very sad but also disciptive. |
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