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Abandon those untruthful looks
You can't hide here
We see it all!
Watch us stand
Watch us scream
Watch us as we stand and turn to dust!
Disfigured souls running amongst
Crack a neck
It breaks
We become new!
We feed off sins
We'll drag you down
Suck you dry
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Disfigured Souls

Contributed by pyrofungus on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:38:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Enter my kingdom of frail human souls
Abandon those untruthful looks
You can't hide here
We see it all!
Watch us stand
Watch us scream
Watch us as we stand and turn to dust!
Disfigured souls running amongst
Crack a neck
It breaks
We become new!
We feed off sins
We'll drag you down
Suck you dry
And crown you ours!

Copyright © pyrofungus ... [ 2004-07-09 19:38:47]
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Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:22:26 PM AEST
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definitely deserves the tital "dark". and its wonderful. i love it and the images it brings to my mind. awesome job.

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:29:47 PM AEST
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wowy... i loved this! very very dark and awesome. great write. 5 stars, wish i could give more.
Arden

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:23:29 AM AEST
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Heavy : Great lines ... good stuff

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:13:40 AM AEST
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wow, this was a splendid dark piece.
I loved the poem as much as I did the title.

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:46:22 AM AEST
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very dark, a great write,

pixie xx

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 07:58:52 PM AEST
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I like this alot, ironically enough it reminds me of my family. Good job.
Des

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST
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please i surrendur!! i dont wanna die!!
lol nice poem! i really enjoyed it, very creepy indeed

tweek

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:41:46 PM AEST
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i liked this alot...great write...awesome job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Seikjo on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:20:39 PM AEST
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Yes it is dark. But it makes me think of this guy i cant stop thinking of. Wonder why. Oh, well i like it very good.

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:39:12 PM AEST
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Very different, I like. It's good when all poetry isnt the same.

love always
corrupted_minds

Re: Disfigured Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 06:11:05 PM AEST
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Heavy and dark but written wonderfuly. Great job!

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