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Array ( [sid] => 55495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => falling [time] => 2004-07-09 15:03:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => im falling
im failing in everything
i dont know whats right no more
i dont seem to know how to breath even
or eat because im dead
i dont realise i killed myself
untill i ended up in hell
where the devil plays with my mind
and twists my bones
round his little finger
i dont want to be the one
the one he chooses
the one confused
and longing to really DIE
i try to catch my breath
but its already ran
i havent got a choice
the angel fading inside of me
screams out to fly
i suffocate the pain
with his laughter
i dont want to fight back
and this is how it ends
my voice vanished
it will never be alright
im hoping ill be an addict soon
so i can long for his punishment
the wings that hung aling side me
are ripped on the ground
my halo that floated so high
is broken in two
my aura that protected me
has been sliced through
my glitter filled eyes
are sucked of all light
my skin that was so clean
is mingled and dirty
my feet that didnt touch the burning road
now cling to the ground
iam a mess
a sign for all to see
obey your wishes
make me whole
make me part of what i loved
i never want to die down hear
i dont know how i got this way
it'll never be alright
so im picking up my sins
and praying with all might
that falling
isnt my time
it wasnt right
inside i realise im the one thats lost
why cant i scream
now im ending my mess
and im breaking my thread
tearing through
and i open my mouth
and all the light thats left
evapourates
and im free from falling

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
falling

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



im falling
im failing in everything
i dont know whats right no more
i dont seem to know how to breath even
or eat because im dead
i dont realise i killed myself
untill i ended up in hell
where the devil plays with my mind
and twists my bones
round his little finger
i dont want to be the one
the one he chooses
the one confused
and longing to really DIE
i try to catch my breath
but its already ran
i havent got a choice
the angel fading inside of me
screams out to fly
i suffocate the pain
with his laughter
i dont want to fight back
and this is how it ends
my voice vanished
it will never be alright
im hoping ill be an addict soon
so i can long for his punishment
the wings that hung aling side me
are ripped on the ground
my halo that floated so high
is broken in two
my aura that protected me
has been sliced through
my glitter filled eyes
are sucked of all light
my skin that was so clean
is mingled and dirty
my feet that didnt touch the burning road
now cling to the ground
iam a mess
a sign for all to see
obey your wishes
make me whole
make me part of what i loved
i never want to die down hear
i dont know how i got this way
it'll never be alright
so im picking up my sins
and praying with all might
that falling
isnt my time
it wasnt right
inside i realise im the one thats lost
why cant i scream
now im ending my mess
and im breaking my thread
tearing through
and i open my mouth
and all the light thats left
evapourates
and im free from falling





Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-09 15:03:19]
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Re: falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:06:23 PM AEST
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please pst comments

thanks x


Re: falling (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 05:51:49 PM AEST
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Very deep and filled with emotion. You are a very good writer.-luckycharm.l




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