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Array ( [sid] => 55493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => confusing [time] => 2004-07-09 14:44:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the world seems never ending
i cannot see the walls of life from death
ive never felt this way before
so insucure
something in the sea
has drownded my tears
and left me feeling an absence of self will
god damns the lack of self confidence
and confusing what is real
this something in my mind
bursting to brake free
the madness
is setting its self lose
the wounds from the inside
havent yet to heal
and my mind is bleak
im confusing reality
its blocking out the truth
its consuming me
i cant control it
its never ending
i cant see
im confusing you with me
the world has yet forgot to involve
me with its plans
im crawling with this pain
fear is what makes me fall
the death
the life
confused and bruised
its that something inside of me
the egar edge to make me see
theres too much pressure to take
im dying on my legs
death is confused with the madness
the bleak equalities
im running
but i dont seem to be moving
i cant be
ive found myself again
the invisible walls
are closing me in
ive become so confused
this world is becoming what i feared
a dream
whisping away
i cant grab
the thud in my throat
the stab in my head
confusing what is real
my eyes shut and i wake
am i dreaming
what is real....
confused



[comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
confusing

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:44:41 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



the world seems never ending
i cannot see the walls of life from death
ive never felt this way before
so insucure
something in the sea
has drownded my tears
and left me feeling an absence of self will
god damns the lack of self confidence
and confusing what is real
this something in my mind
bursting to brake free
the madness
is setting its self lose
the wounds from the inside
havent yet to heal
and my mind is bleak
im confusing reality
its blocking out the truth
its consuming me
i cant control it
its never ending
i cant see
im confusing you with me
the world has yet forgot to involve
me with its plans
im crawling with this pain
fear is what makes me fall
the death
the life
confused and bruised
its that something inside of me
the egar edge to make me see
theres too much pressure to take
im dying on my legs
death is confused with the madness
the bleak equalities
im running
but i dont seem to be moving
i cant be
ive found myself again
the invisible walls
are closing me in
ive become so confused
this world is becoming what i feared
a dream
whisping away
i cant grab
the thud in my throat
the stab in my head
confusing what is real
my eyes shut and i wake
am i dreaming
what is real....
confused







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Re: confusing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:47:55 PM AEST
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Very powerfull write as we all have these feelings from time to time.
luv, huggs, faith hope, peace,
emy


Re: confusing (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:48:31 PM AEST
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have you ever had a dream about waking up
and to find you have woken
but your still asleep?
and asleep you may be still dreaming
or you might be lost between the dead of dreams and the livings nightmares....




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