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You can see them in a shooting star,
Or hear them in the most beautiful song,
That stays with you all day long.

Heaven is the next stage of living,
There is so much love & giving,
Up there way beyond the sky,
Is where the good go when they say goodbye.

They watch over us lovingly every day,
Making sure no harm comes our way,
Caress our skin while we sleep,
Dry our tears when we weep.

Although our loved one’s are no longer here,
They look after us & chase away our fear,
Making sure that even though they are gone,
That we have the strength to live on.

They aren’t really far from us,
Just a ride away on a heavenly bus,
We can see them in our dreams,
Surrounded by beautiful white beams.

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Up In Heaven

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Is where our loved one’s are,
You can see them in a shooting star,
Or hear them in the most beautiful song,
That stays with you all day long.

Heaven is the next stage of living,
There is so much love & giving,
Up there way beyond the sky,
Is where the good go when they say goodbye.

They watch over us lovingly every day,
Making sure no harm comes our way,
Caress our skin while we sleep,
Dry our tears when we weep.

Although our loved one’s are no longer here,
They look after us & chase away our fear,
Making sure that even though they are gone,
That we have the strength to live on.

They aren’t really far from us,
Just a ride away on a heavenly bus,
We can see them in our dreams,
Surrounded by beautiful white beams.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-07-09 12:36:40]
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Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:40:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem Pixie, makes me get this picture of heaven in my head so pretty & bright...great write...
Take Care,
~Kie-Kie~

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by GeorgeJamesDelgado on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:47:41 PM AEST
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Pixie;
Your poem is so beautiful, as usual. Please read my poem entitled I almost made it into heaven. The events in my poem really happened. I know the feeling of love, no fear and no heartbreak of heaven.
Thanks dear, for writing such a beautiful poem.
GeorgeJamesDelgado

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:48:13 PM AEST
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A beautiful write Pixi
Gentledove

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:54:00 PM AEST
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Beautifully done, I enjoyed it very much.

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:02:57 PM AEST
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A masterpeice!
I can tottally relate.
My dad once threw a can up off the shelf and accross the room in front of me to get my attention.
Mom leaves her old bobie pen around that I use to fix her hair with to get my attention.
The last thing I said to my Dad was it want be long before u get your super natural wings beside Mom.
I kissed him on the forehead and said it's o.k., I want be mad, his eyes said it all, I went to eat and got back in the room as he drew his last breathe.
This write is very moving and thought provoking and so true.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:53:16 PM AEST
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I too feel they are always with us. I feel my husband all the time. Many times I have felt my Dad and GrandDad. Yes, they remain close even though physically they are gone.

Rita

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:14:50 PM AEST
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What can i say that hasn't already been said?

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:22:02 PM AEST
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awww very beautiful pix!

Kimberly

Re: Up In Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:49:06 AM AEST
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Krissy, this is lovely. Truly beautiful.
Sorry, i've missing out on you pieces. I've been away for a while. Definitely have to do some catching up! :)

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