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Array ( [sid] => 55425 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Its Just Suicide [time] => 2004-07-09 01:14:43 [hometext] => I wrote this a long time ago when i was very suicidal. I am still sorta but not as much anymore. I still feel this way at times even. [bodytext] => I just want to die
Tears run down my cheeks
Suicide Seems the way
A slit of the wrist
A pull of the trigger
It could be over so quickly
I don't know how to cope
With this much pain
It fills my heart
Until I go insane
This seems the only way
To end this pain
Just kill me now
Please Lord let this end
I hate this life
I must wonder
Where it all went wrong
How did my heart
Turn so black
Who would want this pain
I want it all to go black
And never come back
Let me die
It's Just Suicide [comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 36 [informant] => BloodyTears5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Its Just Suicide

Contributed by BloodyTears5 on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:14:43 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I just want to die
Tears run down my cheeks
Suicide Seems the way
A slit of the wrist
A pull of the trigger
It could be over so quickly
I don't know how to cope
With this much pain
It fills my heart
Until I go insane
This seems the only way
To end this pain
Just kill me now
Please Lord let this end
I hate this life
I must wonder
Where it all went wrong
How did my heart
Turn so black
Who would want this pain
I want it all to go black
And never come back
Let me die
It's Just Suicide

Copyright © BloodyTears5 ... [ 2004-07-09 01:14:43]
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Re: Its Just Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:21:38 AM AEST
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i used ta be like that.... u just need friends.... i am ur friend u can talk ta me... i like tha poem keep it up.... u got my info juz hit me ^ if ya need ta talk

Re: Its Just Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:16:34 AM AEST
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i understand how you feel... but it's really good expressive, and very emtional
powerful write!

Re: Its Just Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:56:12 AM AEST
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That poem has an almost songlike flow.I just hate that you had to endure so much pain to write something so chillingly beautiful.I've been in that place myself once or twice,so I understand where you are comming from.Just keep breathing and God will do the rest.All we have to really do is adapt.Great poem,full of emotion,keep writing.

Brian

Re: Its Just Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:25:59 AM AEST
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If you are here in this world, you were meant to be here. Nothing- no bad situation and no circumstance can change that fact.

No one has to be strong all the time, no one needs to be perfect and no one can ever always be happy.

We could all be a lot of different things at lots of different times in life, but when we are created by the very breath of God, the truth is- that we are never unloved.
He cares every second, and every minute and every day.

Re: Its Just Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Kevin on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:15:56 PM AEST
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really really good, i really enjoyed it a lot. Very chilling and spooky, and yet at the same time very beautiful and brilliant.
-Kevin

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